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Review:

Chapters read: 8/8

Title: 5/5
I absolutely loved the title. It describes the plot well and is quite unique. It's so catchy.

Cover: 3/5
The cover is looking nice. You have covered everything in it from the Everest to her nightmare and also that dream catcher. It looks aesthetic. Just try changing the font of that subtitle at the bottom and it will look even more pleasing. Also the girl which is there making the 'V' can be bigger in size because otherwise the cover seems empty.

Book description: 2/5
You have tried to cover everything in the blurb from her nightmares and her dream which provides a nice, good summary of the book but still it requires some changes like you started with that she was having a nightmare and then it went like 'No god, not again'. This particular thing felt like something bad was going to happen but then it was actually just a nightmare. So, you can frame it like 'Ahhh, again a nightmare. Why god
Why do I get these always. That dreaded day always comes in front of me.' This would have been better. Also you wrote in the blurb that she had a physical disability but you
didn't mention that it was because of some incident. I am not saying that write the whole incident in the blurb itself but just write like 'lost it, to the only physical disability I had caused by that one incident.' It would create a curiosity in the reader's mind and they would think which incident are you talking about which would force them even more to click the 'read button.'

Prologue: 0/5
There is no prologue for this book. I would suggest you to write one. Let it be short but do write that as it gives an overview and the idea how the story is going to be.

Grammar: 9.5/10
I don't have much to say over here. You took care of the punctuations, words were spelled correctly. Apart from some minor grammatical mistakes in some chapters (which I feel are bound to happen) everything was perfect over here and that's one of the main reason I enjoyed reading it.

Plot: 9.5/10
I loved the plot. You showed the life of Naina so beautifully. How the poor girl just suffered but still that dream was there with her. It all seemed realistic. I was able to connect with Naina so much. You took a good topic. Dreams are a thing that everyone sees and strives for to get fulfilled but when it doesn't happen, it really
breaks us and you took up with that amazingly.

Flow of the story: 3/5
Flow was not steady. At times it seemed rushed like when Naina got raped. Her turmoil could be described in a better way and then also when she got to know that she was pregnant. Also, you should have shown at least something that Sameer does for Naina because when I suddenly got to know that they both love each other, it was a bit surprising as there were no SamAina scenes. So make it a bit more elaborative.

Creativity: 4/5
The whole plot was creative. This was the first time that I was reading something like this. Not that I haven't read the autobiographies of the famous mountaineers (had to
because they were in my syllabus). I liked that you didn't make it a cliché by showing that even after losing both her legs, she climbed the Everest or she became 'first' because until the last chapter I was thinking this only. Good that you showed that what if
she wasn't able to but at least her daughter fulfilled the dreams and for parents it's like their own achievement only.

Your interest based on the content: 5/5
I absolutely loved it. While reading the chapters, I used to be hopeful the whole time that something good will definitely happen but then after coming till the last line, you just
kept on breaking my heart. I was feeling all the emotions of Naina and was able to connect with her.

Overall opinion: 9/10
The story has the potential to make you cry and it will make you forget your own worries because you will get lost in the story. Modify the blurb a bit, do one last proofread and
also elaborate the scenes a bit more and it's perfect.

Total: 50/65

Title:
Not needed.

Blurb:
"Just a few more steps and you will be there Naina. Come on Naina! You can do it. Hold it tight and push yourself up. Forget about every other freaking thing and get on the top. Just hold the rope, scream and push yourself to your limits. You will achieve your goal!" I heard cheerings from him. I could see my goal just 100 meters away from my eyes. My smile was wide while the struggle and pain were visible as well.
" NAINAAA" was the shout I could hear last.
******

"Not again God. Please. Not again. I can't bear these nightmares again and again. I can't bear my defeat repeatedly. I can't lose again and again. I could have won but I lost. I lost my dream, I lost my life, I lost myself!" A fully sweating Naina thinks while holding her head. Her tears were flowing endlessly.

From her late 20s till her early 50s, this is what happens again and again to Naina. Nothing could help her or her nightmares. It was difficult to decide whether the cancer was taking her life or this feeling to have lost her everything or was it her disability? She can't understand what is the reason that life has become this miserable for her at the time when she should be happy.

Even in her 50s, she can only think about the incident that happened 20 years ago. The moment which turned her whole world upside down. A dream catcher above her bed couldn't help her to catch her dream.

But what if the dream catcher is real?
What if her dream catcher helps Naina to fulfil her last wish?
What if her dream catcher climbs the Everesting for her, EVERESTING HER DREAM?
What if her dream becomes a ray of life?

Hop inside of the story to know Naina and her dream catcher's story. Far from cliché and surrealistic stuff, I present a realistic story with an amusing ride of emotions.

Prologue:
Have you ever lived 20 years with a nightmare of the same incident where you lost something precious? I have.

Hey, I am Naina Aggarwal. A 50 years old woman who is currently fighting against cancer. But I have other things which hurt more than this cancer. I had a disability before I got this disease. Many pity me for the fact that I have no legs anymore. I am bound to a wheelchair, therefore. This is much more painful than this disease. At least the disease wouldn't have stopped me from completing my dream.

My dream? It's the Mount Everest. I want to climb on the top of the earth's highest mountain above sea level. Just imagine standing 8848 meters above the sea level and celebrating your win.

I trained five years for this to only fall far away from my dream. Just a bit far from my goal, I lost my dream. Ever since that happened, I became incapable to get rid of my nightmares. The dream catcher never helped me. My whole life has been decided by that incident. Cancer didn't catch me. This incident did. This cancer won't give me death. It will release me from my pain to face the same thing each night. It will put an end to my guilt of loosing at the end. It will be something for my betterment!

Unknown person's POV

Hey. I am someone important in Naina's life. I am someone close to her. It's difficult for me to see her fighting herself all the time. It's terrible to see her facing this though disease. It's awful to see her disheartened.

Cancer doesn't assure her life but isn't it the truth that everyone needs to die once upon a time? Some are destined to leave a bit earlier and some are provided with a bit more time.

At that time everyone has a wish. And I know what Naina's last wish is. She wants her dream to be completed. She wants to see herself climbing Mount Everest and becoming a successful mountaineer. I maybe can't make her complete this dream but I will complete this dream for her. She's a great human being. After all the pain she endured, she deserves this little happiness in her life.

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