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Review
Chapters read: 3/3
Title: 2/5
Your earlier title was much better because if we go with the literal meaning of your current title then it means 'without any thought' and it doesn't go with the plot but your
previous title was too long, so I would suggest search for some new title which is short and crisp and also gives a idea about your story.

Cover: 2/5
The cover, no doubt is absolutely amazing. Now, you must be thinking, why did I cut your marks? That's because the cover is not going with your book. The cover is giving me a mysterious vibe and after looking at it I thought that the story would have some mystery and dark romance but in actual the story wasn't like that. So, I would suggest that you go and ask for a redo from your graphic designer because the cover should match the theme of your book. One more thing, the cover still has the previous title. Get that changed.

Book description: 3/5
The starting two lines are extremely beautiful and instantly catches my intention. However, the blurb is quite small. I feel you could have written more in that part where you talked about the 'conservative family' and it would look even better.

Prologue: 0/5
There is no prologue for this book. I would suggest you write one. Let it be short but do write that as it gives an overview and the idea how the story is going to proceed.

Grammar: 8/10
The grammar was fine however there were some mistakes with the tenses but overall it was good. Also, at a few places a word or two were missing so I would suggest you to edit the book once again.

Plot: 9/10
I liked the plot. You made me feel different emotions. Initially, it seemed all happy-happy and then you turned the coin and made us emotional and then at the end, you turned the coin again and made us laugh. So, it was a nice one though I still feel it could be a sad one. (Sucker for tragic endings.)

Flow of the story: 4/5
The flow was going fine but just at a few places, you paced it up a bit. Like where you showed that Anvi's alliance has been fixed with Mithradev, that part should have been slow. It was like they rejected one boy and the next moment they fixed an alliance with the other one. So, elaborate that part more.

Creativity: 3.5/5
It was creative. Your efforts were visible in it and you didn't make it a cliché by stretching up the drama was the best thing. You thought of ending it up with a dream was a great thing to do.

Your interest based on the content: 4.5/5
From the start to end, I was hooked to it. It was hell sure interesting and I enjoyed reading it.

Overall opinion: 9/10
It is a great read for those who love happy endings with a tid bit of drama. You just need to edit it, change the cover and add a prologue to it.

Total: 45/65

Graphic Review
Graphic:

Review:
Graphic Quality: 3/5
Originality/Creativity: 6/10
Color Scheme/Contrast: 3/5
Font Selection: 2/5
Text Placement: 4/5
Blending/Manips: 7/10
Relevance to Genre: 8/10
Overall Impression: 6/10

REVIEW:

For a first timer this is a nice try. The manipulation is good but the selection of Louis pic could have been better. Instead of a tilted head a straight looking one would have given a better maipulation result. While the font is nice and is placed very well but since this is a harry potter cover, the font used should have been "Harry Potter" and the "THE" should have been centre aligned. It is good that you went for green color scheme signifying Slytherin house but the green blending could have definitely been better. The border used should have been more outwards since with this placement it the cover looks a bit cluttered. The graphic could have been enhanced by using filters and light adjustments. Also the quality is a bit poor at the moment, so from next time make sure to enhance the final cover so that the quality increases. But overall a good effort.

Cover