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Greetings!

Down below will be prompts for your Devil's Advocate Session. Please comment inline on any suggestion of mine you would like to dive deeper into, and I will reply as soon as possible. You are not forced to take any of these suggestions. I only wrote about what I thought was necessary.  


Alright. Uhhhh-

Since I can't judge this for characters/plot/whatnot, this will be a very simple, short, and sweet review.


Style--

I have to say, your style deserves a huge round of applause. I don't mean to expose your *cough* letters, but everything flows very smoothly. Chronologically, everything makes sense. 

Word Choice--

Honestly, because this book is so personal, I (again) don't have much of a say in what you write. However, I would love to see some more extravagant word choice. If this is writing purely for entertainment, go ahead and just let it all out. A variety of word choice would simply be a bonus for your readers. 

Aaaaand that about sums it up! I would love to see you continue this book, as long as your crush stays off Wattpad XD.

Happy writing!


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