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Down below will be prompts for your Devil's Advocate Session. Please comment inline on any suggestion of mine you would like to dive deeper into, and I will reply as soon as possible. You are not forced to take any of these suggestions. I only wrote about what I thought was necessary.  

Character Development--Right off the bat, I love the names Whisper, Bane, and Clover. However, I am a bit confused as to why Clover was killed in the first few chapters. I don't see any major grief from Bane and Whisper after they find out about their sister's death. As I thought Clover was one of the main characters, I was surprised when she died just a few chapters after we met the trio. If you would like to explain, comment inline to this paragraph.

Grammar/Spelling -- There are some small grammatical errors such as dropping off punctation at the end of a piece of dialogue, run-on sentences, no commas when we need some, etc. I suggest you download something like Grammarly to find these real quick and correct them. Keep in mind that Grammarly is not always correct, but it can be helpful with a few pointers. If you cannot/do not wish to use Grammarly, then I can go through it with you on this chapter. Read your chapters aloud to yourself and see if you instinctively pause when there is no punctation. In these cases, add some form of punctation.

The only issue I bumped into with spelling was the spelling of Whisper's half sister's name, Plague, I believe. Sometimes, you spell it as 'Plauge'.

Style--I love the fluid way you write action scenes. Again, if you add a few periods and commas where you pause when you read it out loud, I would love to see more of these fighting scenes you have a knack for writing.