Jai Shri Radheshyam
Jai Shri Rukminimadhav

So here is the first shot of my story..
First time I am writing os so Ignore the mistakes..
I am writing the story where in katelal and sons.. after agni Rajawat see dr Pramod in Garima's bed room..

Dr Pramod make Garima Susheela understand... But still they both didn't agree with dr Pramod. Pramod feel little sad start leave he come down..
And meet inspector agni
Aaj toh vastav mein agni ban jal raha hai jalan mein...

Pramod- whattt

Agni- arey doctor sahab ap hai mujhe laga koi chor hai jo sidhiyon se Garima ji kamra mein ghus kuch churana cahata hai..

Pramod- I am look like a deaf to you.. or wese bhi kuch churana bhi aaya hu toh apko ku mirchi lag rahi hai apka thodi kuch cura raha hun...

Agni- doctor sahab as a police inspector I am just doing my work.. or agar Dharampal ji ko pata chal gayo ki ap yaha aisa Garima ji kamra se aa jaa raha hai toh kiya hoga pata hai..

Pramod- bataya ga kon ap toh batana se raha.. agar aap batayaga toh yeah bhi batana padega ki apne Garima ji ki balcony ka watchman ki jimadari le hai.. or dusri baat chor toh paraya hota hai
(Come close to agni) mein toh Garima ji ka apna hu caho toh puch lo..
(Agni glare at him) so I think I should leave

Pramod goes agni hurt himself by kicking on wall...

Pramod come to his home...
Minnie comes

Minnie- kiya hua Pramod

Pramod- mom Garima ji and Susheela ji both are decided to leave their dreams..
He tells everything to Minnie

Minnie- unhone sapne chod diya hai par sapnon ne unhe nahi

Pramod look at Minnie

Minnie- Dharmpal ji ne unse guru dakshina mangi or unhone de bhi di.. par unhone sirf apna sapna unhe diya hai par sapna ne apne ap ko Dharampal ko nahi sopa hai..

Pramod- means

Minnie- Susheela or Garima ne apne sapne bhala hi de diya hai par unka sapne abhi bhi unka dil mein zinda hai jo ki unhe cheen se jeena nhi denga...
Pramod tum janta hona ki mena or jai ne tumhe kiya sikhaya hai..
Pramod look at Minnie
"Every Problem has a Solution"

Pramod look at Minnie and smile... And hug her..

Here agni punching a punching bag...
And remember the scene

Agni- aao yeah doctor toh kuch jada hi aaga nikal liya..
Garima ji ka kamra tak pohuch gaya.
Yona sahi nahi kiya chota haddi ne.
Pitego yeah

Next Day
Garima Susheela goes to college..
Some boys said bad things about them and Susheela punch their faces...
And come back home..
Suddenly Garima phone beebed she see their is a msg by pramod

Garima ji kiya ap mujhe cafe mein mil sakti hai argent hai Akela aiya ga or bina Susheela ji ko bataya plzz

Par ku dr Pramod

Please a jaiya na agar aap mujhe apna friends manti hai toh please

Okay kitna baje

4:30

Okay

Susheela- kiska phone tha

Garima- dost ka tha arey woh classmates haina rina uska tha.. usse kuch notes Manga the mena

Susheela- accha

In evening..
Garima start leaving for cafe.

Susheela- kaha ja rahi hai

Garima- kuch nahi bass aisa hi bahar ghumne ja rahi hu thoda maan halka ho jaya ga

Susheela- chal mein bhi chalti hun

Garima- nahi tu rahana de dono jaya ga toh woh Chachi bina baat ka sawal karaga

Susheela- par

Garima- please na sushila tu janti hai wesa hi guru dakshina ka baad se mera maan wesa hi kharab hai

Susheela- accha thik hai ja par jaldi a jana

Garima- hmm

Garima leave from there by auto.. her leaving was seen by our inspector he follows garima....

Here susheela feel bored at home so she thought to go out..
She come down and see puttu, shishupal, Dharmpal..

Puttu- Sushila di I missed you so much (by hugging) I feel very very bored their..

Susheela- accha bore toh mein bhi ho rahi hu chal bahar chalta ha

Dharmpal- kaha jaoge

Susheela ignore Dharmpal and go out for coffee with puttu..
She come to coffee shop and shocked to see dr Pramod with a girl.. she is Garima but susheela can't see her face bcz Garima face was hidden by clothe only one person know that the girl is Garima who is with dr Pramod and the person is who followed Garima ji and now he is angry to see dr Pramod and Garima in cafe shop.. our inspector Agni Rajawat...
Both agni and susheela see them by hidden ourself..

Here Dr Pramod and Garima talking

Garima- Dr Pramod mein apki baat samjh rahi hu

Pramod- nahi ap meri baat nahi samjh rahi hai agar samjh rahi hoti toh. Ab tak maan cuki hoti. Yeah sach hai ki apne apni kachi or ustara guru dakshina mein..
Par iska matlab yeah thodi ki ap har gaya arey ek ladki jab jang ke maidan mein utarti hai toh ya phir jeet ka aati hai ya phir mar jati par apne toh haar hi maanli abhi toh ladai baki hai isse ladai mein apko jeetna hoga kuki baat sirf apka sapno ki nahi iss generation ki soch ki hai apka ek sapna aaana wali new generation ko nahi soch dega.. unhe himaat dega, unhe batayaga ki ladkiya kamzor nahi hoti, ek ladki agar lakshmi hoti hai toh durga bhi hoti apne pariwar ka liya woh lakshmi banti hai, apne bacho ko samjh ko jab kuch samjhti hai toh woh saraswati banti hai or jab dushmano ka samaaz ka anth karni ki bari aati hai toh woh DURGA banti hai...

Garima look at Pramod with tears
Yeah sach hai ki apka samne koi or nhi apka papa hai jinse aap bohut pyaara karti hai par woh pyaar hi kiya jo apne pariwar ko sahi galat ki samjh hi nahi de sakta yeh baat ap janti hai ki Dharampal ji galat hai toh apko unka agents khada hona hoga unka aacha ka liya..
Apko yeah karna hoga har problem ka solution hota hai bass jarurat hai toh shant maan se solution dhundhne ki..
Hope You Understand

He start leaving but stop.. he look at his hand which is catch by Garima.. she look at him with tears.. she is understood his every word. She stand up and hug Pramod which make jija Sali shocked 😲 and angry 😡
Pramod also hug Garima

Garima- thank you so much dr Pramod agar ap nahi hota toh

Pramod- mein Huna apka sath.. (they both look at eachother ) koi or apka sath ho ya na ho par apka yeah dost hamesha apka or susheela ji ka sath hai kuki ap jo kar rahi hai woh sahi hai or sahi ka sath dena jaruri hai

Garima smile at him

Garima- sushila bohut Lucky jo usse ap mila

Pramod- kash yeh baat woh samjh pati but it's okay

Garima- ap janta haina woh

Both- balbudhi hai

Both start laughing and leave making jija sali angry