The judges' and readers' feedback/Review are based on their own opinion and knowledge in writing. If you are not convinced by their comment, you can do a private message , migharry,  to address your concern. Thank you!

Always and forever, Laura -PlumaNiDelfina 

Judge 1: This one shot truly made me shed a tear. So emotional and I really feel how the writer wanted to touch every readers' hearts. Although I already have an idea and foresight of the plot, especially when I have read the narration of June, still, damang-dama ko ang sakit niya. I only hope love will also set him free from the pain and makapagmove forward na siya. Anyway, be careful with the punctuation po, especially sa dialogue tags po kasi I think, perfect naman na po ang narration niyo po. Ito na lang talaga ang kulang to make your writing style the best. Iyon lang po and keep writing!

Judge 2: I love the message of the story. Halatang halata na you give yourself in that one. Medyo nakulangan lang ako, but still maganda naman siya. Congratulations in advance!

Reader 1: Sad ending pero nangyayari talaga in real life. Nalungkot ako para kay Lolo June. Overall, it is a nice story at napakaganda ng plot! Good Job author.

Reade 2: Maganda po ang plot ng story na ito. Nalungkot talaga ako sa ending ng story. Sana maging okay na si June. Keep writing po!

One Shot to the Heart - Exrineance

Judge 1: Title pa lang po, najustify na nito agad ang takbo at kinahihinatnan ng story. Hindi lang iyan, pati sa mga readers, talagang na-shot iyong heart namin. Paano ba naman kasi, Kris and Kath's story reflects the reality of some relationship's challenges, na nai-encounter ng mga couples. Trust is indeed the bedrock of a relationship and in their case, hindi sapat ang nararamdamang tiwala ni Kris which leads to... (I don't wanna spoil). Well, obviously, I really enjoyed this story and I also love the writing style. It's something new and unique. The characterization? It's perfect. Naa-identify talaga ang attitude ng dalawang characters kahit pa hindi binabase sa font. Sobrang impressive. All in all, talagang napahanga po ako rito kaya keep up the good work po!

Judge 2: Your text format is quite amazing but I highly recommend na just use some regular font next time okay. It's better to be more better. I don't want to drag down your story kasi maganda naman actually. Medyo nakulangan lang ako ng twist. Try to add some different concept that are more related to your title next time. Congratulations in advance :)

Reader 1: Your story is cute author. Talaga naman ang story na ito ay angkop sa edad nila. Para talaga akong bumalik sa high school. "Mini patata". Nabitin lang ako sa dulo. Haha pakisagot nagkatuluyan ba sila o hindi? Nice story author good job!

Reader 2: Ang ganda po ng story! Maraming makakarelate sa story po ni Kath. Kinilig po ako at natawa sa part na 'yong sa food at sa jejemom song. Congrats po! Nagenjoy talaga ako sa pagbabasa.!

The Scorching Heat of Sun -  VimLights

Judge 1: At first I got hesitated of course the title it so familiar. Parang pinaghalong 'Scorching love and suns heartbeat and midnight sun'.. The imagination is so rare, and I salute the story went will. Napaka direct to the point. Try to add some more twist anyway, Keep it up! Nice Work! Congratulations in advance :)

Judge 2: Goodness! This is the kind of story I've always wanted to read here in wattpad. Iyong hindi madaling mahulaan and hindi lang mag-iistick sa iisang genre. Kumbaga kung romance, talagang romantic scenes and whatnots lang. But this? Ang daming lessons, especially when this story also shows the reality of how it feels to have a skin disorder. It's also spectacular to see how you correlates the sun and love. Ang genius! Kaya lang, sinaktan mo po ako sa plot twist mo. I was even blown up sa last part. Anyways, keep up the good work po :)

Reader: This is one of my favourite story I've read so far in Romance category. I like the way you tackle the social issue experience by someone has a rare disease. I cried in the last part! Good Job!

Reader: Naiyak po ako promise! Akala tuloy nila may umaway sa akin haha. Grabe ka po author ang galing mo sa pagdedeliver ng kuwento. Sana totoo na lang lahat! Congrats po!

Pahimakas ng Kahapon - @persephone_spark persephone_sparks

Judge 1: This story is a blast! Although I already guessed that Alana and Andrew was the reincarnation of Andres and Gregoria, the fact na these significant people pala ang nareincarnate nila ang nagpalaglag ng panga ko. I thought before na familiar lang ang names. Furthermore, I love how you put a little touch of history and how my nose bleeds dahil sa sobrang lalim and emotional ng letters. Very informative pa since may pa extra chap ka po where ni-share mo ang not-so-famous tragic love story ng dalawang historical figures na ito. Keep up the good work po!

Judge 2: Wow! Just Wow! Speechless ako! Sobrang nagustuhan ko yung buong story. I'm not a fan of digmaan when I'm in my grade school. But I started loving it when I'm in grade 6. Yes! Medyo late na ako na-inlove sa history. But alam ko yung love story ni Bonifacio at ni Gregoria. Para akong binabalik sa nakaraan na minsan na rin na'tin pinag aralan. Good job! And keep it up! Congratulations in advance again.

Reader: Hala naalala ko po ang I love you since 1892 sa story na ito. Buti iba-ibang naman po ang plot kaya kudos ka doon. Kinilig po ako sa dalawang bida promise! Ganda po ng story. Congrats!

Reader: Title pa lang na-curious na ako. Habang binasa ko ang story na ito ay talagang nagandahan na ako sa takbo ng kuwento. Damang-dama ko ang pagkaromance nito. Kinilig ako at naiyak kay Oreng at Andres haha. Best in line na tumatak sa akin "Ikaw ang aking bayan" Nice story! Salamat at may happy ending.

The Groom's Bride - @Th0omas21

Judge 1: The Groom's Bride at first medyo nakakalito. But, it really hits so good. Ang ganda ng pagkagawa. Naiyak ako dun sa "kinasal nga pero sa kay Rachelle". If you believe that true love really exist then they exists. Keep it up! Galing. Congratulations in advance.

Judge 2: Ang sakit-sakit ng istoryang ito. Grabe, gusto kong maiyak at isumpa ang nangyari kay Lester! Tapos pa, hindi ko nahulaan agad ang pangyayari and I even thought na parehas lang ito ng ibang stories na nabasa ko but NO! Tagos na tagos sa bones ko ang sakit na naramdaman ni Karyll. Ikaw talaga Lester grr! Kidding aside. Anyways, nagustuhan ko talaga ang plot. Although you need a little more improvement sa writing style po, it didn't hinder me to enjoy your story. Be careful with the dialogue tags and action beats po. Keep up the good work!

Reader: Isa ito sa mga maganda ang plot. Malinaw ang paglalahad mo ng story. Simula na nakilala ng babaeng bida si Lester hanggang sa magpapakasal ang dalawang bida ay talagang detelyado. Naiyak ako dahil "Pinagtagpo sila, pero hindi itinadhana." Nice story author.

Reader: Nagustuhan ko po ang story na ito, kasi medyo hindi ko po nahulaan ang susunod na mangyayari. Naiyak lang po talaga ako sa huli. Good Job po!

Pwede Pala - Damnuxxerouz

Judge 1: Love is unexpected nga raw ang sabi nila. Pero pwede pala talaga, pag na inlove ka nainlove ka. Kahit alam niyo na my mali hindi niyo na yun maiisip. There's no but's and if's! Different colors can fit as one shade. Sobrang amazing ng story medyo check mo lang yung mga typo error mo. So far the story went well naman.... Keep up the good work! And Congratulations in advance!

Judge 2: After reading the blurb, I was expecting na talaga sa magiging ending ng story however, it didn't change the fact na naku-kyutan ako sa dalawa. Kio and Ivan's love story isn't uncommon na pero most of the time, people can't still accept this kind of relationship. But in your story po, pinatunayan mong PWEDE PALA talaga ang ganito. Mapapa-sana all na lang ako kay Ivan. Anyhow, a little revision will do po para ma-improve pa ang technicality and writing style. Nevertheless, magaling naman na po kayo sa narration but let's not forget the rules on five senses po. All in all, I enjoyed your story. Keep writing!

Reader: Ang kuwento mo ay sumasalamin sa mga kabataan ngayon na nasa LGBTQ+. P'wede pala na magkaroon ng true love ang nasa third sex. It is a nice story. Good Job author!

Reader: Gosh! Buti pa siya may forever. Ang cute po ng story na ito. Sana talaga wala na pong judgemental para lahat magkaroon ng forever. Support the rainbow color!

Ang Munting Entablado- Cereal_Ligaya

Judge 1: I kinda love the story but what happened? Medyo bitin yung content ng story. So I advise na if you're writing a story, always make sure na magmemeet at magmemeet ang una at huling kwento. Don't left your reader a riddle to guess what will happen next. Always remember na no matter how short or long yung content ng story always put an ending. By the way keep it up :) Congratulations in advance :)

Judge 2: Aww, I don't know what to feel sa last part kasi nag-expect pa naman ako sa love story ni Lena. But anyway, that's not the point here though. Na-amaze naman kasi ako nang ma-justify mo ang title, doon sa dulo po ng story mo! This story portrayed the reality kung lalawakan lang talaga natin ang isipan tungkol sa ano pa ang meron dito sa mundong ating ginagawalan. I also loved how you made the scene so smooth, na hindi mo pinilit ang ending para lamang sa madalas na ini-expect ng mga readers. Kudos ako riyan! Pero naaawa ako kay Froilan... Just a little reminder po, take a closer look at the usage of punctuation marks, dialogue tags and action beats po kasi I believe, maganda na po ang writing style mo and mas gaganda pa ito if you properly apply these things. Keep up the good work po!

Reader: I like this story. Sumasalamin ito sa realidad na hinaharap ng mga babaeng bayaran sa lipunan. Nabitin lang ako sa bandang dulo kasi medyo 'yong kilig ko papunta pa lang haha. Overall it is a nice story and someone can relate with this. Good job author. If you have time dagdagan mo na lang medyo bitin talaga promise!

Reader: Maganda po ang kuwento na ito. Naawa lang ako kay Lena kasi wala siyang choice. Medyo na hung lang po ako sa dulo. Sana may part 2 ang story author!

Confessing To Mister Snobber -  fabulousanthena

Judge 1: Parang sobrang dinala ako ng kilig sa kung saan.. Kung saan hindi ko na mahanap ang kakaibang pakiramdam na kanyang ipinaramdam. Sobrang young nung story, mostly nangyayari talaga. Lets admit it all maganda yung flow ng story. Medyo dagdagan pa ng ibang twist. But overall it flow so good. Keep it up! Congratulations in Advance.

Judge 2: Mapapa-sana all, kina-crushback na lang ako sa story na ito. Haha! Natatawa lang ako sa friendship nina Winnie ang Missy kasi literal na ganito kasi talaga ang nangyayari in real life. 'To namang si Winnie, ang daming crushes! Lol. Anyways, although masasabi ko pong expected na ang flow sa plot, I still appreciated how you wanted to tell the readers na everyone has a chance, especially when it comes to confessing our feelings to someone. Malay natin, mutual din pala ang nararamdaman ng isang tao sa atin diba? And confession is not a bad thing. On the other hand, I just wanted to point out with the technicalities po and how you sometimes switched from third person pov to first person pov po. All in all, I enjoyed the story. Keep writing po!

Reader: Isa na naman ang story na ito na mapapasana all ka na lang. Kinilig ako sa chat scenario ni Marcus at Messy sa group chat nila. Lakas maka anime ng mga scene. All I can say is your story is well written.Good job!

Reader: Nagustuhan ko naman po ang story na ito, kasi magaling po si author magdeliver ng character at scene. Ang galing, kinilig talaga ako at naimagine ko sila.

Feral Bonds -  gril18

Judge 1: The plot twist of the story is very unique. I don't know why but for me it is but it's in Rated 18. Siguro kasi you never missed any single word. You only use pure Filipino language. Your story concept is okay and your story is okay. Keep it up! Congratulations in advance.

Judge 2: With all honesty, I really loved how you narrate the scenarios po and kung gaano po kalinis ang pagkakasulat niyo. Lalo na po ang pagkakagamit niyo ng deep tagalog words, nagustuhan ko talaga ito. This story has a mature content and at first, akala ko talaga iyong typical scences ng ganitong stories lang ang mai-encounter ko but I was wrong! Especially noong napunta na naman ako sa last part. Akala ko pa naman, ang isa sa mga pangarap ni Mika ay makokompleto na after sa nangyari. Ugh, another heartache! Anyway, this is not a bad thing po. This only means, na-hook ako sa story mo. Hindi kasi pangkaraniwang lalo na doon sa ordinansa part. I wonder kung anong year ito... All in all, wala po akong maipintas dito. A big thumbs up! Keep up the good work po!

Reader: Natatawa ako habang nagbabasa sa story mo at napamura na lang ako hahaha. Hindi ko expect na masyadong rated18. Tagalog na tagalog ang ginamit mo na salita. Best in line for me na tumatak sa isipan ko "Mika, kaya mo'to. Ang isipin mo lang ay para kang kinagat ng langgam." Nalungkot lang ako sa ending. Overall it's a nice erotic-romance story for me for a one shot. Good job author!

Reader: Maganda po ang story na ito. Ang galing mo po magdeliver ng story po. Kaya lang hindi ko expect ang ending author. Ang saklap! Keep writing po and Congrats!

My dream- _gorgeuslady

Judge 1: Most of us dreams, we live in our own dreams. We work for our own dreams to make it real. Okay naman yung content ng story. Medyo na kulangan lang ako sa content. Parang my gusto akong malasahan na hindi ko mahanap sa content. But you can always check and add some more naman okay. I love the tittle. And also check your errors your

Judge 2: This one is an interesting yet a tragic story though. At first, hindi ko agad nakuha ang flow at point ng intro sa whole plot pero kalaunan na-gets ko naman since it was Meyen's profession–writer. Anyways, the story was quite unique po talaga and it would be nicer if you included the five senses po in terms of narration and i-detalyeng mabuti ang takbo ng story since masyado pong mabilis. But since one shot naman po siya, I understand naman po kung ba't ganoon. Also, be careful po sa grammar and punctuation, especially sa dialogue tags and action beats. On the other hand naman, nabitin po ako sa ending! Josiah and Meyen deserved more!Charot. Well, keep writing lang po and God bless!

Reader: . Una akala ko nagkakamali ako ng binabasa. Akala ko talaga ikaw ito author nagsasalita 'yon pala writer pala ang bida haha. Ang ganda ng plot mo author! Nalungkot talaga ako sa ending. It is a nice story! Well done. Tiamo!

Reader: Ang cute naman po ng story na ito. Parang destiny lang po na magkatagpo sila ayeah! Kinilig po ako kay Meyen at kay Joshia promise.Tragic lang sa last part po huhu. Congrats po!

Good luck to all OF YOU💖