Book: Sakura Eyes
Author: naeomiiii
Chapters I've read: 4

This is a beautiful story.

The cover was very appealing,so was the description. Nothing much to say, it had me swoon.

Coming to the story, it was a beautiful work of fiction. Despite not being a great fan of fantasies, I found myself drawn to your story. The plot, language, setting was set up like a master story teller. I'm greatly impressed by the storyline. The character description was amazing. I've hardly seen so vivid and clear description of a human being in fewer words.

I've found the story very nice, worth appreciations and awards. The decoration was simple yet elegant. You haven't ornamented your story much but just enough to attract the readers. The chapter was long enough to hold the interest of a reader.

Overall I'm very pleased with the story and I'd definitely recommend this to every reader who stops by this review.

Keep going.

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And I'd rate you...
8.5/10

Book: Popular meets popular
Author: aikexoxi
Chapters read: 7

This is the best young adult novel that I've read in a while and would continue reading.

The story is about Belion Carter, a girl who has lost her father and moved in to her Aunt's house with her mom and siblings. It is basically the story of the instant discomfiture between Belion and Alec who is a swimmer. The story continues being their teenage romance, beautifully decorated with words and dialogues.

The description was great, it immediately captured me, enticing me to go through the story. The character development was brilliant. We barely see teen fictions with such vibrance as we find in POPULAR MEETS POPULAR.

The mistake that I'd like to point out is the missing punctuations, names written in small and a few grammatical errors. Further, from my very personal view, I'd like to say that the title does not go with the story. It is definitely eye catchy but it doesn't give the vibe of the story.

Plus I'd like to add, there is a non-chapter in the beginning where you write the description and put up the characters list. It would be really nice if you could put up character aesthetics instead of blunt descriptions. What attracts readers is good presentation besides good writing. So I would suggest you to make some character graphics and put up in the chapter. If you need a graphic maker or advisor, you can do this profile.

The plot construction was wise and vivid. The story runs fluidly as the author has designed it. The cover is also good, no comments on that.

This story is definitely a thumbs up and deserves reads from young adult lovers.

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And I mark you...
9/10

Book: Infatuation of the black cat
Author: enchantingmagic
Chapters read: 4

I was not really happy with the cover or the description at the first place. The cover is too drab and inky and the fonts are not coordinating with the base picture. The description was short but too blank to give any idea of the story.

Coming to the plot, it is a well presented story. The aforementioned story is a fantasy, often gives Harry Potter vibes to the readers. The language was lucid, words used wisely. The story begins and continues in a flow, which, I appreciate a lot.

There were very few grammatical errors, most of which could be checked through revision. The character description was fine, nothing extraordinary. The plot construction was minimal, set against magical reality.

Despite everything, your story somehow lacks the X-factor that could hold on readers.

With a good plot, the presentation of story should be kept in mind.

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I mark you...
5

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