Book: The Eye
Author: CursedHobbit
Chapters I've read: 4

The cover compliments the book theme very well, indeed, I liked it a lot. The description, too, was well written, short and enough descriptive. I wouldn't want any changes in the exterior anyway.

Coming inside the book, the thing that disappoints me first is the aesthetics. I think you could change that, they doesn't really look good.

Venturing back to the main review, I think the plot to the story isn't a cliche, though the idea of high schoolers is like a forest fire across Wattpad. The theme and the settings was nice and apt.

The story behind with the protagonist Minnie who introduced us to her niche, her family, friends, her likes and dislikes. Minnie's character, as a narrator is not described in words but by her own words, we gather up some kind of ideas about her.

The begining of the book in very interesting and out of the box. Even the narration is something that catches my eye. The story was magic and reality intermixed.

While I was starting to believe that the girl's having a normal life, I was pushed to a world of magic. Not that I complain.

The plot flows well where Minnie lives the life of a normal high schooler, with the same old high school problems. I think you could have made a difference there. As a fantasy story, there could be more action, more magical experience.

There are a few grammatical errors which can be corrected through revisions. The presentation is minimal but okay.

Overall it was a good read. I am happy with the plot construction, style and glow.

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I mark you
7/10