Book: Savanah
Author: MissAshleighDre
Chapters read: 8

I had previously read this book.

This story is a typical teenage/highschool romance between a pretty girl and a cocky boy that you find in hoards across Wattpad.

The cover was decent but could be better. The description was nothing extraordinary. It simply gave us an idea of Savanah and her love story that we were going to read in the story.

I found the story to be a little disarrayed. Presentation could be better. The thing that I cannot but point is the series of grammatical mistakes throughout the story. The first and foremost is that you haven't used punctuations wherever needed. This made the story literally incorrect. You have used chi-sled in place of chiseled. There is a lot grammatical errors which has to be corrected while revision.

The story is predominantly monotonous. I did not find uniqueness in it. It was basically every Wattpad highschool romance, a little imperfect.

Savanah does all the basic teenage stuffs and she has an overprotective boyfriend who makes her feel low and exercises control over her. Then there is Stefan, our protagonist's neighbour who unnecessarily calls her princess. I find this very stupid. Stefan has a crush on Savanah and then you basically know where the story is advancing.

This story is pretty predictable mostly because it's lack of exclusiveness.

I cannot give you any tips for your story's betterment, all I can say is recheck the grammer. It is quite frustrating.

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And I mark you,
5/10