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12. MONSTERS LIKE US

Book: Monsters like us
Author: SpectreWords
Chapters read: 5

The description was not very fulfilling and created a very vague idea about the story in my mind, though the cover was very appealing and it complemented your story. I would suggest you to write a broader and more descriptive description for the story.

The title of the story is nice but I think the previous title, ie, Anatomy of Tragedies sounds better and more appropriate.

Coming to your aesthetics, they're very beautiful and proves the aesthetic taste of the writer very well. I was very happy with the way you presented your story. It was a food for the eye.

Coming to the story, the plot was nice and you have skillfully carried your story in a good direction. The characters of Levi and Raven were meticulously portrayed. It was a third person narrative which is quite difficult to write but again, you have mastered in that zone. The story somewhat gives a paranormal romance vibes. 

The main characters are two broken people trying to find solace in each other and at the same time are fighting their own demons. Your words are not an intricate mesh of nothingness. Rather they are adroitly chosen and intellectually used. I wouldn't saw the story is very slow flowing with lucid verbose but the plot has many ups and downs which make it more beautiful.

There is not a single grammatical error that has caught my eyes. I found it very visually satisfying besides being a great story.

Carry on. I believe you deserve more reads and votes on the story.

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And I mark you,
7.5/10

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