Book: Coding Decoding
Author: Charlieruuh
No. of chapters I have read: 4 chapters excluding the preliminary accessories.

The description was short and sufficient. You didn't put much exterior glam but the i
nside turned out well. But the cover was one thing I did not appreciate. The choice of fonts did not go well with the background. It was displeasure.

The subheading was good but putting it on the cover was not a good idea, it being too big. Sub headings are supposed to be few-worded and eye-catching. The gif character aesthetics were fine but honestly, I couldn't appreciate it much. If you could put well organized, aesthetic character graphics, it would turn up better.

Coming to your genre selection, it was absolutely correct. Coding Decoding is a general fiction.

The plot of the story was beautiful and carried out well. Your style of writing is actually far better than your presentation. The story is of a young hacker, Islared. You've vividly described the characters of your story and have put it in a platter for others to enjoy. I've liked your character descriptions.

The chapters were extremely small, I felt. Probably you could increase a few more words.

There are a few parts which stuck me. One of them was you mentioned Islared's adoptive mother as Miss when she is actually married and suddenly you've abruptly changed to Mrs. I hope you'd rectify these mistakes. Another thing is you've used italics in most of the conversations in the first few chapters. The usage of italics is to put emphasize on a point. You don't need to change the font style of the conversations.

The story was overall a good one. How much I've read, I've enjoyed. There are a few grammatical mistakes that I'd ask you to rectify. Please increase the chapters.
Carry on, it's a good going.

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And I rate you
7/10

Book: Esteé: the unloved star
Author: stellsola

The title is good, suits with your story. The cover is nice, quite aesthetic. I would really appreciate your effort in making it.

The description is brief and enough detailed for a short story to attract any reader.

Coming to the story, it is good and soulful. I'd ask you to change the font from italics to normal. It isn't looking that good. The major problem that I've found is the gap after a quotation mark in the beginning of a dialogue.
For a short story I'd say that the number of words is enough.

The plot was interesting. It being a one chapter story did hook me till the end. I loved the setting and plot construction. The narrative was interesting. The imageries of the coffin and the tree touched my heart. The epitaph that you've made up for your character was good.

It was your first time writing a story, it turned up good. There are a few things that you could change through revisions.

Overall, it is a decent story, worth a reading.

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And I rate you
6/10

Book: Hellbound
Author: @syns_to_ink
Chapters read: 4

First thing first, the cover is very beautiful and eye catchy. The description is crisp, you've used the best snippet from your story to actually make it seem interesting. It is good.

Starting with the prologue, it had me hitched. The chapter length was okay. The language was lucid yet the usage of words at places were artistic. I'm highly impressed. Your story continues splendidly.

Few lines were very interesting, particularly Death isn't the end. I know it is a very simple line but the way you portrayed it in the prologue, along with the settings and the girl named, Victoria chase, it turned out extraordinary.

The story is written in first person narrative, in the view of Adrian King, the probable Grim Reaper and the protagonist of the story. The beginning of each chapters did have me hiked already. I'm very glad that you've applied for the review and I got to read a fantastic story.

There are no such grammatical mistakes. No doubt on the originality of the plot. Loved it.

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And I rate you
8/10