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The elders were giving blessing to her and her to be child while others were giving gift to her when it was Abir's turn to give gift leaned near her ear and said something

" Prawns khane chalogi?"

Listening to that Mishti gave him a full blown smile and nodded like a kid.

Everyone was shocked to see the view in front of them as till now all have her gifts but she was not so pleased and now only listening to Abir she is so pleased and happy.

"Thik hai phir function ke baad chalenge"

Mishti nodded

After the function Mishti got ready in yellow Anarkali but the dress was having deep u cut at back due to which her marks were seen. So she pulled up a jacket upon it.

When Abir asked the reason she said that she is feeling cold as it was month of December. Abir agreed and they left for restaurant

Now they both are standing in front of a nonveg restaurant, mishti is happy while Abir is feeling nervous.

Mishti ordered many things Abir didn't ordered anything.

"Abir tum bhi kuch order kr lo"

"Nhi mishti it's ok"

"Abir plz kuch to khalo"

"No mishti"

"Nhi mujhe accha nhi lgega agr me khaungi aur tum mujhe bs dekhte rhoge"

"Mishti me apna kaam kr lunga phone pr  bs tumhe nhi dekhunga"

"Abir plz"

"To kya non veg order krlu?"

Mishti was on verge of crying seeing this Abir said

"Thik hai yaha nearby McDonald's hai me waha se kuch le aata hu ok"

"Cheeeeee "

"Ab kya hua Mishti"

"Abir McDonald's cheee it doesn't has any taste nor spice you eat something different"

Abir just started caressing his forehead

'yaar yaha to me hi phas gaya isse accha to parcel le jata aur mishti to car me baithkar khane bolta lekin ab kya karu zaldi soch abir wrna ye violent ho jayegi
Phir pata nhi tu ghar jayega ya hospital.'

Thought Abir

The waiter who was silent spectator of this scene questioned

"Sir baju me pure veg restaurant hai waha se order karu?"

"Ha bhai bacha liya tune ja zaldi ja ke le ke ya "

"Sir kya lau?"

Abir was frustrated by now he was going to say something but Mishti interrupted

"Khichdi, 4 Paneer paranthe, aur 2 lassi"

Waiter left. Abir widened his eyes at the order.

"Itna sb kuch kon khane wala hai Mishti"

"Tum or kon"

"Me nhi kha skta itna "

"To me huna help krne ke liye"  and winked at him

Abir shook his head in disbelief.

Rajvansh family is vegetarian. Mishti was from a non vegetarian family but she liked only fish and in variety of fish she only ate prawns. From past 2 months she did not ate prawns.

Paying the bill they both finished their dinner and came and sat in the car.

On Mishti's insistence, they both walked for few minute at sea link. Reaching home Abir opened door by spare key as everyone might be sleeping now .

Instead of going to her room, mishti entered kitchen. Abir shot her a questioning look

" Thodi si bhook lgi hai Abir besan ka chilla bna ke khaleti hu, tum jao so jao"

Abir being a gentleman made her sit on chair near dining table went to kitchen made besan ka chilla  and served her.

While she was eating he cleaned the kitchen top. Coming back to her he removed her jacket casually saying aren't you feeling hot. Mishti was so engrossed in eating that she forgot why she pulled up the jacket.

Removing it Abir kept it on Dining table and was going to sit beside her.

While something caught his eyes, it was nothing but the same marks she was trying to hide from whole world.

In a cold yet pain laced voice Abir asked

"Mishti kya ye usne kiya hai?"

She realized what happened, the last bite of food which she was going to have halted in between she slowly kept the spoon back in the plate.

Tears were forming in her eyes, words were not coming out of her mouth,  lump was formed in her throat so she just slightly nodded as she remembered how she got those marks.

Abir slightly caressed her marks through his fingers.

A shiver ran down through her spine as his cold fingers came in contact with her warm skin, all her hair stood in attention showing how Abir's slight touch effects her body.

In a painful voice Abir asked her

“Does it pains Mishti?”

a sudden urge to kiss her pain away came in Abir's mind, but he brushed it off in order to not make her uncomfortable.

At this Mishti nodded on a slight no.

Abir sat on the chair beside her, gently cupped her face, rubbed her tears with his thumb and moved his head in right to left direction, indicating her not to cry.

'why is his face holding pain as if he has gone through pain and not me, why Abir, why? Already your family had done a lot for me. I can’t see you in pain abir it just hurts to see you in pain, right now I am not feeling bad for myself but bad for you Abir'  

thought Mishti.

Abir holded her hand which was resting on table and squeezed it lightly indicating that he is with her.

He took the last bite, holded it near her lips and gestured her to eat it. She ate that bite Abir took a half filled glass and made her drink water and chuckled while remembering how she scolded him for taking full glass of water and drinking only half.

Abir took the plate and glass moves towards sink washed them and kept it on their place. All this while Mishti’s eyes never left Abir

His wife and daughter  luckiest women in the world she thought

“Mishti chalo tumhare room me chalte hai”

“Abir bus 5 minutes plz mujhe neend nhi aa rhi hai, tum jao me chali jaungi”

“thik hai koi help chahiye to Bata Dena room ka door open hi rhega”

She hummed in response. Abir left and Mishti started her self talk.

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