SUMMARY

REVIEW

Short and sweet summary. Not too revealing yet eye catchy.

MISTAKE

Troy and April "find" a diary.

Instead of :

Troy and April "finds" a diary.

COVER

I loved this one. The girl gives a perfect look to the cover. Good job.

CHAPTERS

There are fifteen chapters. But I only read the first four chapters. Sorry, but blame my lack of time.

MISTAKES

There are many grammatical errors throughout the book.

Example :

"I have never seen a house that black." He said.

Correction :

"I have never seen a house that black," he said.

You don't have to capitalize the first word after the sentence. And of course the dialogue tag!

Then,

"Too me, the house reminded me of a spooky cartoon."

Correction :

"The house reminded me of a spooky cartoon."

Why use too me? That too, it should be TO ME!

I think this story needs SUPER editing. Otherwise the plot is good and the writer is doing a great job.

OVERALL THOUGHTS

A one time read. If edited once, it has the capability to stand out. All the best.

INVENTOR

The very creative brain of Ms_Horrendous

GENRE

👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻

Boo! It's a horror story!

OVERALL RATING

2/10