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Recap; Laksh come from India to meet his brother Suraj all of a sudden. Chakor is Suraj girlfriend. The watchman of their building complex is death a knife was stabbed in him.

The police come n did the investigation of the murder. Suraj was not a suspect as the time schedule n his alibi were proved. Soon the formalities were done n they were allowed to go into their apartment.

Laksh was thinking - how this happen is it connected to me? To that what I Saw? No no no! It can't be possible -.

Chakor was frighten she was shaking all over her body. Her heart was racing n her mind was playing pranks with her. She closed her eyes n could see the death face of the watchman...

Chakor was shaking... Suraj saw her in immediately hugs her. Chakor relax I'm here nothing will happen to u!.

Chakor cries. Suraj woh woh watchman!!! He is death! Their were no traces even the forensic couldn't find anything.

Suraj; the rain washed everything away.

Chakor; who could do this?! The watchman was so nice.

Suraj nods.

Laksh felt bad as he couldn't help them. - Chakor Bhabhi is scared it is all my fault it is falling me till here. But who is this?! -.

Suraj went to Laksh. Hey u fine?. Laksh nods. Haan Bhai what is with Chakor Bhabhi? Is she fine?. Suraj; she is tougher than she looks like. Don't worry right now she is a bit scared but she will be fine soon. What abt u? I mean ur second day n a murder?!.

Laksh; bhai all fine!. Hota hai {it happens}. Suraj; it happens? Now really?. Laksh rolls his eyes. Bhai please forget it. Suraj nods. Here a pillow n a duvet. Sorry it is just this couch but I will organise something okay?.

Laksh nods. Thank u Bhai but it's fine.

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Laksh woke up... by nosies

Hmm Suraj! Suraj!
Chakor!

Laksh - really Bhai saying to me not to call her Bhabhi but u r having fun right! -.  Headphones please... uff yeah.

Suraj stop
Chakor u can't make me stop now!

Chakor; Laksh
Suraj widen his eyes. How can u call the name of my brother?!
Chakor; Suraj I didn't mean that call I meant to say that Laksh could hear us as the walls r very very very thin!!! Suraj; what! No yaar. Chakor; Suraj no!. Suraj stops kissing her neck he stood up. Chakor; Suraj where r u going?!. Suraj; washroom!. Chakor laughs. Haan go!.

Laksh felt a gentle breeze on his face he opens his eyes. Aaaahhhhhh 😱😱😱😱😱.

Laksh hold his duvet tight. Suraj comes out from the washroom. Chakor; Laksh! They open the door n saw Laksh... well they saw a double Laksh.

Chakor; Suraj !!!!! Laksh!!

Suraj saw that. Laksh what happen! He went to the injured Laksh... but he went through him. Laksh looked up from the couch. Bhai bhabhai u.... u.... u.... u can se...eee it too???.

Suraj took Laksh n Chakor he stands in front of them the injured Laksh was moving toward them... Suraj was standing like a statue. Chakor; be careful Suraj. The injured Laksh vanished.

Suraj looks left n rights. Laksh; I won't sleep here alone I will sleep with u in ur room. I don't care that u just made love!.

Suraj - shit he hears us! -.

They all went into the bedroom.
Laksh was sleeping on their feet side. Chakor was clutching her hands on Suraj collar. Suraj caresses her back. Laksh; I can't sleep here can I sleep next to u?! Please! Suraj moves a bit n gave him space...

Laksh woke up he was sweating!! He was heavily breathing he looked at his brother n bhabhi... he shouts Bhai!!!

Laksh was sweating like.

Suraj hears his scream. He runs out of his room. Laksh!!! What happen???

Laksh looked up. Chakor who was getting ready comes with a glass of water.

Laksh; bhai bhai u fine?!. Suraj sat next to him. What happen?

Laksh looked in the room. He is still in the living room on the couch. A dream in a dream... hell shit!

Laksh took the glass of water n drinks it in one go!.

Chakor sat next to him. U fine?!. Laksh nods. Haan Bhabhi... a nightmare. Chakor; I think I will stay at home today. Suraj nods but Laksh. No Bhabhi nothing is wrong with me! Please u go! I will handle it. Suraj; u sure?. Laksh nods.

Chakor n Suraj were getting ready. Laksh was watching them. Laksh; cute couple. Chakor; we can tell him. Suraj; if u want... he put his ring on... n she too.

They come out. Laksh lifts an eyebrow. U r married? Sukor nods. Laksh; y u hide I'm sure mom n dad will be happy. Chakor; I runaway on my marriage day. I met him I marry him after a few months. Laksh; wah! I love it! Gud u hide it! Suraj; okay we r leaving if u need anything just call me. Laksh nods. Be careful! Sukor; u too.

Laksh was frighten now he was alone in the apartment. He was starving for food. He checked the kitchen cupboards n found nothing.

What yaar is Bhabhi keeping Bhai on diet or is Bhai keeping her on diet?. There must be somewhere chips.

Laksh looked up! On the upper cupboard 😁. I found it!

Laksh opens the packet of chips n ears when he hears a loud scream n hammering on many doors...

Laksh startled he was moving slowly to the door on his tiptoes. Then the hammer was becoming louder

... please open the door! Please!! Help me!

Laksh; oh no

... please if someone is inside! Open the door 😢😭.

Laksh gulps he opens the door n a woman runs into the apartment. She closed the door behind her n hugs him.

Laksh was numb but he could hear the footsteps... of the other's her followers.

They hammered on his door. Laksh was very scared.

The girl; please save me! She begs on him! Laksh nods. U don't worry I will handle it.

He shakes all over the body... n slowly opens the door. There were 3 goons. Give us the girl!

Laksh shook his head. Girl? Which girl?

The goon; don't lie where else has she gone? It is the last floor n the last door! Laksh gulps. Point hai but y would I open the door?

Aaahhh 😱. Laksh turns really u r screaming now! Laksh stood there numb.... the injured reflection of him enters him. Laksh eyes become black he turns n punished each goon.

Laksh closed the door... the reflection leaves his body... she faints ... like he does...

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So?

What is happening with Laksh

Double Laksh

Who r these goons?

Who is this girl?