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♕ROMANCE RESULTS♕︎


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~ First Place: Keep bleeding love by EastCoastPinay


~ Second Place: Marvelous Mishap by Shaunatay


~ Third Place: The Hunchback's Reluctant Bride by  and The Beauty of Florence by Happysnowfeet


Judge: FrozenRobot004

# Remembering Him

title: 2

Cover: 3

Blurb: 7

Opening: 3

Character dev: 13

plot:22flow:7

Grammar:13

Overall: 8

Total: 78

Review: Though, I liked the plot I would say that there are a lot of characters and is very slow paced.



# Flower on the Riverbank

title: 5

Cover: 5

Blurb: 8

opening: 3

Character dev: 14

plot:23

flow:8

Grammar: 13

Overall: 9

Total: 88

Review:  I loved how you included the cultural background. The visual creation is amazing. 


# The likes of you

title: 2

Cover: 3

Blurb: 6

opening: 4

Character dev: 13

plot: 21

flow: 6

Grammar: 12

Overall: 7

Total: 74

Review:  I like how vocal you were about this plot, something new but somehow it felt a little slow paced and visually not clear at some points.


# Vacillant

title: 3

Cover: 2

Blurb: 8

opening: 4

Character dev: 13

plot:22

flow:8

Grammar:13

Overall: 9

Total: 82

Review:  A new plot, wrong genre I might say but it turned out to be one of my favorites.


# The Hunchback's Reluctant Bride

title: 5

Cover: 5

Blurb: 8

opening: 4

Character dev: 14

plot:24

flow: 8

Grammar:14

Overall: 9

Total: 91

Review: I freaking loved it!!!! I don't know why I imagined a lot The Witcher cast into this but good work!!! The plot, title and the cover were on spot.


Judged: Love_at_first

# Marvelous Mishap

Title(5): 5

Cover(5): 5

Blurb(10):8 (it is a little lengthy that's it.)

Opening(5):5 (it's marvelous!!)

Character development (15): 12 (because I've noticed development in Reign's character but I've not seen much in William... but I'm sure you'll do it in the coming updates.)

Plot (25): 25 (the plot is different and unique which attracted me. I hope you won't drag it. )

Flow(10): 9 ( in the starting, like in the second and third chapter, I felt you dragged it a little. But the others were perfect! Continue that flow!)

Grammar(15): 15 (come on! Your Grammar is amazing and never I found any errors.)

Overall enjoyment (10):8 (as I said, only in the second and third chapter were a bit slow... but the rest, I enjoyed it ! Continue your story please and get well soon..)

Total:92


# Lost Souls in School

Title (5): 5

Cover(5): 2 (I suggest you to change the cover as it isn't matching the story.)Blurb:9 (it's perfect,but add a few more elements to make it more attractive.)

Opening(5): 5 (it's perfect)

Character development (15): 10 (as it still is in the starting, I didn't see much of a character development. But I think there will be an improvement soon.)

Plot(25): 25 (Honestly, the plot is the element which attracted me! I literally loved it!)

Flow(10): 7 (I think you're dragging it a little bit... maybe it's your style...I recommend you to be on point.)

Grammar: 14.5 (I'm being totally judgy, but sorry I've seen a very few spelling mistakes. They can be edited easily)

Overall impression: 7 (as I said, it's a bit lagging... but the plot and your style... Amazing!! All the best for your further updates)

Total: 84.5


# Keep bleeding love

Title: 5

Cover:5

Blurb(10):10

Opening (5):5 (god ! It's so perfect !!!"

Character development(15) : 14 (I've been through only 8 chapters, but I can see a lot of development in Aya, but not much in CID.)

Plot(25): 23 (though it's a normal routine plot, I loved the way you presented it!)

Flow: 10! (Come on! It's the best!!)

Grammar: 15! (No where I've found any mistake)

Overall impression: 10 (I really really love this story and I've added it to my reading list too!! I literally loved the way you describe everything!).

Total: 98


# The Beauty of Florence

Title:5

Cover:2 ( I recommend you to change the cover as the text isn't visible and I think it isn't suitable for the book)

Blurb: 10(it's perfect!)

Opening(5):5 ( it really intrigued me from the starting!)

Character development: 13 (I've read only the initial chapters... yet, I've found development in the characters... I can assume that they're totally developed now.)

Plot: 25 ( honestly, I love the plot ! I like travelling and all that stuff and your story attracted me. It's beautifully written.)


Flow: 8 (in the beginning it was quite confusing due to the scene shifts, but later I got used to it. Maybe add in more detail about the scenes. )

Grammar: 15 (no where I've found any mistake. It's perfect!) Overall impression: 8 (as I mentioned above, describe more about the little details and the happenings. Also change the cover ... I recommend you to choose vector cover.)

Total: 91


# Flight 118

Cover: 4. (The cover is nice, but more details can be added in)

Title: 5 (it's perfect!)

Blurb: 10 ( everything is written well)

Opening: 5 ( that was the one which attracted me)

Character development: 11 ( I didn't see much of a development in it... but there is a very slight one)

Plot: 25 (it's unique and perfect!)

Flow: 8 ( okay , a few chapters were too long... like I felt that you lagged it. But again chapter 5 was amazing !)

Grammar: 15 (there are no mistakes)

Overall impression: 7 ( I felt that it lagged in the second and third chapters... your book is really intriguing. I find more of a suspense and mystery thing from your book rather than romance. All the best for your future works)

Total: 90


Congratulations Winners!

Thank you for participating everyone.

- Alishkha

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