♕ROMANCE RESULTS♕︎
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~ First Place: Keep bleeding love by EastCoastPinay
~ Second Place: Marvelous Mishap by Shaunatay
~ Third Place: The Hunchback's Reluctant Bride by and The Beauty of Florence by Happysnowfeet
Judge: FrozenRobot004
# Remembering Him
title: 2
Cover: 3
Blurb: 7
Opening: 3
Character dev: 13
plot:22flow:7
Grammar:13
Overall: 8
Total: 78
Review: Though, I liked the plot I would say that there are a lot of characters and is very slow paced.
# Flower on the Riverbank
title: 5
Cover: 5
Blurb: 8
opening: 3
Character dev: 14
plot:23
flow:8
Grammar: 13
Overall: 9
Total: 88
Review: I loved how you included the cultural background. The visual creation is amazing.
# The likes of you
title: 2
Cover: 3
Blurb: 6
opening: 4
Character dev: 13
plot: 21
flow: 6
Grammar: 12
Overall: 7
Total: 74
Review: I like how vocal you were about this plot, something new but somehow it felt a little slow paced and visually not clear at some points.
# Vacillant
title: 3
Cover: 2
Blurb: 8
opening: 4
Character dev: 13
plot:22
flow:8
Grammar:13
Overall: 9
Total: 82
Review: A new plot, wrong genre I might say but it turned out to be one of my favorites.
# The Hunchback's Reluctant Bride
title: 5
Cover: 5
Blurb: 8
opening: 4
Character dev: 14
plot:24
flow: 8
Grammar:14
Overall: 9
Total: 91
Review: I freaking loved it!!!! I don't know why I imagined a lot The Witcher cast into this but good work!!! The plot, title and the cover were on spot.
Judged: Love_at_first
# Marvelous Mishap
Title(5): 5
Cover(5): 5
Blurb(10):8 (it is a little lengthy that's it.)
Opening(5):5 (it's marvelous!!)
Character development (15): 12 (because I've noticed development in Reign's character but I've not seen much in William... but I'm sure you'll do it in the coming updates.)
Plot (25): 25 (the plot is different and unique which attracted me. I hope you won't drag it. )
Flow(10): 9 ( in the starting, like in the second and third chapter, I felt you dragged it a little. But the others were perfect! Continue that flow!)
Grammar(15): 15 (come on! Your Grammar is amazing and never I found any errors.)
Overall enjoyment (10):8 (as I said, only in the second and third chapter were a bit slow... but the rest, I enjoyed it ! Continue your story please and get well soon..)
Total:92
# Lost Souls in School
Title (5): 5
Cover(5): 2 (I suggest you to change the cover as it isn't matching the story.)Blurb:9 (it's perfect,but add a few more elements to make it more attractive.)
Opening(5): 5 (it's perfect)
Character development (15): 10 (as it still is in the starting, I didn't see much of a character development. But I think there will be an improvement soon.)
Plot(25): 25 (Honestly, the plot is the element which attracted me! I literally loved it!)
Flow(10): 7 (I think you're dragging it a little bit... maybe it's your style...I recommend you to be on point.)
Grammar: 14.5 (I'm being totally judgy, but sorry I've seen a very few spelling mistakes. They can be edited easily)
Overall impression: 7 (as I said, it's a bit lagging... but the plot and your style... Amazing!! All the best for your further updates)
Total: 84.5
# Keep bleeding love
Title: 5
Cover:5
Blurb(10):10
Opening (5):5 (god ! It's so perfect !!!"
Character development(15) : 14 (I've been through only 8 chapters, but I can see a lot of development in Aya, but not much in CID.)
Plot(25): 23 (though it's a normal routine plot, I loved the way you presented it!)
Flow: 10! (Come on! It's the best!!)
Grammar: 15! (No where I've found any mistake)
Overall impression: 10 (I really really love this story and I've added it to my reading list too!! I literally loved the way you describe everything!).
Total: 98
# The Beauty of Florence
Title:5
Cover:2 ( I recommend you to change the cover as the text isn't visible and I think it isn't suitable for the book)
Blurb: 10(it's perfect!)
Opening(5):5 ( it really intrigued me from the starting!)
Character development: 13 (I've read only the initial chapters... yet, I've found development in the characters... I can assume that they're totally developed now.)
Plot: 25 ( honestly, I love the plot ! I like travelling and all that stuff and your story attracted me. It's beautifully written.)
Flow: 8 (in the beginning it was quite confusing due to the scene shifts, but later I got used to it. Maybe add in more detail about the scenes. )
Grammar: 15 (no where I've found any mistake. It's perfect!) Overall impression: 8 (as I mentioned above, describe more about the little details and the happenings. Also change the cover ... I recommend you to choose vector cover.)
Total: 91
# Flight 118
Cover: 4. (The cover is nice, but more details can be added in)
Title: 5 (it's perfect!)
Blurb: 10 ( everything is written well)
Opening: 5 ( that was the one which attracted me)
Character development: 11 ( I didn't see much of a development in it... but there is a very slight one)
Plot: 25 (it's unique and perfect!)
Flow: 8 ( okay , a few chapters were too long... like I felt that you lagged it. But again chapter 5 was amazing !)
Grammar: 15 (there are no mistakes)
Overall impression: 7 ( I felt that it lagged in the second and third chapters... your book is really intriguing. I find more of a suspense and mystery thing from your book rather than romance. All the best for your future works)
Total: 90
Congratulations Winners!
Thank you for participating everyone.
- Alishkha
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