New and Badass by @Marisha_bae

REVIEW OF CHAPTERS 1-3

Apostrophes of possession.

Dialogue was still not formatted right in some places.

One exclamation mark will do.

Ellipses only need 3 dots.

Tense jumps.

I can see where you've made improvements though! Keep this up and take a look at my comments for further corrections.

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