Username: Percabeth_to_the_end

Title: Please don't go (Percabeth)

Cover: A cover is most important one for a book. A book is judged by its cover, remember? So add one good cover.

Summary: So far the story is what your summary says. Typical teenage drama. But is that all to the story? When it comes to Percabeth, obviously it's a magical adventure. There should be more. Sorry summary didn't grab my interest.

Story: Like I said before, nothing happens except some teen drama. Nothing new except for the twin siblings.

- You need to add descriptions, a lot actually, since there are only dialogues, not much descriptions. Since its in first person pov, the chapter also lack emotions. You should show how he felt when he saw Anabeth likewise...

- keep an eye on Punctuation mistakes.

The chapters in-between "uhhhhh" "sorry" okay i don't want to be rude here, but that's irritating when you want to read a book.

I don't find much grammatical errors, so that's a plus.

Rating: 4/10

Happy Writing :-)

By AtheScrivener