User name : PoisonBish

Title : The yellow Rose.

Review: The cover is okay but you need a better professional looking cover. I'm also sort of confused with the title. Why Yellow Rose? It's the significance of Friendship, right? But your story plot is about male rapism? Also, you need to work on your summary. You can put a scene a here which can explain the story plot instead of telling us about it. People are not interested in knowing, what you are trying to show as you mentioned in second line of your summmay. This is a sign of immature writer. If you want to write such thing then add a author note in begining of the story but never in summary.

Summary must be polished, error-free and attractive.

Moving on to the content of your book, it seems interesting but there were lots of mistakes which required major editing. Also, don't write the conversation in text style, even if they are having it over the phone. Like in first chapter when his mom called, you need to describe it properly.

Don't use words like LOL specially when you are describing his thoughts. I mean do you use that word while thinking?

Your story seems so rush. Try slowing down.

Another suggestion, if you're using another language then don't forget it translate it in English but if you want to target Indian readers only, then it's fine.

Your book has a great story line and you did a great job in portraying Sanskar's emotion. Good job. A little more description can make it amazing!

Also you can contact a editor who can help you with grammatical errors.

Rating : 5/10

Good luck!

Reviewer : newbubble

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