Username: jewelopix365

Title: Blade that divides us

(I wonder why you chose the title and if It is going to happen in future.)

Cover: cover is so powerful and grabbing attention. Good choice.

Summary:

I love the way u produced it with all mysterious questions. It ll definitely lure the readers in.

Story

That is one good book. I loved reading it.

The pace of the story is adequate. I don't really find major problems in the story. Ur MC is adorable, strong and funny. Loved her the way she is. Her mind voices are the best.

There are few minor mistakes u need to take care of.

1. Grammar - you switch from present to past to future. When u use all these tenses, its gonna be like a diary (just saying. Not that ur book is like that) keep an eye on tenses. It's a mistake we all do n a little edit would help .

2. For a book, u shouldn't be changing povs. Write everything in a single pov if its in first person. I think the pov change for a tiny piece in chapter 2 is unnecessary.

Otherwise, I enjoyed the book.

Rating: 8/10

Keep writing :-)

by AtheScrivener