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Review - 151

Author: SpencerReidTho

Title: Spencer Reid x Reader

Okay. I normally don't read this type of stuff, especially since your first chapter is named smuttt. I don't understand the need for triple t.

Anyway. For this type of story, you don't really need a cover or description. People either want to read your smut or they don't. So I'll just focus on other things.

Story: first off, you have good grammar, good description, good pacing. Your smut was also not vomit inducing.

I do however question the plot. I find the whole stuck together in the shower thing very unlikely. Couldn't they like wear swimsuits? We did that in camp all the time when we had common showers.

So yes, beyond that little bit of convulted plot, I have nothing to give you. For the type of story you're writing, you did well.

With your writing skills, I'd advise you to try writing a real story. Something original. I think it would be a good story.

Best of luck.

By - Wimbug

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