Author: idontknowhowtobe
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Title: Little big somethings

I like your title. It sounds smart.

Cover: even if it's basically a mad mash-up of Clipart,  it kinda works for what your trying to do. It's a catchy cover and it sort of fits with what you're trying to do.

Summary: it's poetry. You don't need a summary. Luckily, because it doesn't make sense.

Story: I'm going to be completely honest. Poetry is not my strong point. Actually, I totally and completely suck at it so I can only give you my uninitiated opinion.

Your poems are cool. Different. Full of feeling. Your grammar is also good enough not to flip my Nazi switch. My only qualm with it is that you seem to change rhythm in the middle of the poem. Like it rhymes for most of it and then all of a sudden,  it doesn't.  This might be some progressive thing I just don't get, but I warned you I'm no good at poetry. Which is why your not getting an overall score.

The words are good, but I can't judge your form. I liked the subject matter, though. Good job.

By - Wimbug