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Story Name: The Blood Of Wolves

Title: Very typical. That’s all I have to say about this title.

Cover: To be honest, I don’t like the graphic. it’s very plain looking. For a dark book like yours, it can have wonderful cover art. Get a designer and make your cover bringing out the dark theme or the love theme.

Summary: The summary is quite interesting. But you can get better with this. A few punctuation marks and grammars were noted. Attend them. Other than that, you can make it much better giving the cliffhangers appropriately. One question- What can’t she help in having a poor male to female ratio in her pack?

Story: As this is a level two review book, I will have to say this. I am tired of reading these cliches in a Werewolf book. Why is it always that werewolves have to get attracted to one particular wolf and all? They’re supposed to have a dual personality. In their human forms also, they can fall in love with a human. Why always the wolf has to dominate? Pardon my poor knowledge on the subject, please. I do not belittle your plot or your thinking, but I think you could very well show something new.

Now, the book is really well written. You’ve beautifully shown the scenes. The flow was very smooth. Especially, I liked the prologue. The descriptions are beautiful, although sometimes you give too meticulous descriptions. You don’t need to describe each and every object of the scene. just give us an idea of them.

Sometimes, I felt Lily’s thoughts are a bit childish. At 17, one is usually much more mature than she is. Waking up to an alarm clock, followed by mother’s hilarious rebukes- one of the biggest cliches in the world. Try to get over this. Though sometimes a bit kiddish, I liked the bond between Lily and Leah. Something I found unique here is that Leah has a mind of her own.

Unlike an action book, your book has mostly a teen fiction feeling to it. It could be darker and heavier. Despite having things of beauty in your book, it has got a lot of grammatical mistakes. Edit them properly. Especially the tense switches need attention. Also, give some details of the surroundings in the latter chapters.

The journey through the Werewolf world doesn’t seem boring with your book. Because, in spite of giving grumpy wolves, you have humorous and more human-like wolves. Also, you have a well-knit mystery theme. You’re carrying it out with might and I like it.

Overall, I like the plot. Lily being mated to Luca adds to the thrill, though the cliche says put. But you manage to give fresh thoughts even in your cliche. The merging of the packs to find out the killer is a good idea and I hope you execute it well. 

Rating: 7/10. Get better with the technical part and trim the exaggerations, your book will do great. The five-six chapters I read shows your attempt to bring in fresh air to a cliche plot.

Good Luck! ☺

By - HerSpectre