Park Jimin Category {RESULTS}
So heyo buddies...
Host snow and dharshini here!
We are here to announce the winner and runner of the Park Jimin category...
So fast right?
Thanks to ur judges...who made their work fast....
Judges of this category: @AMELIE1318 & @_mytrueself_33
The books which are submitted are awesome in its own ways...
If u didn't win then don't worry....learn from ur mistake and win next time...
Let's get to know the winners...
Nervous right...ya me too...
So first I will announce the runner hehe..
The runner in Park Jimin category is...
Judge : @AMELIE1318
Book Title : A lie;love
Username: savagejustlikesuga
Title: 7/10
I like how you put a semicolon in your title. But maybe put it as "A lie; a love" I don't know, maybe?
Cover: 7/10
It's a bit plain. Like there isn't any quote/subtitle inside. And also, I recommend you to put Jimin upright. Not landscape but portrait.
Blurb: 8/10
Loved how you started with a dialogue, then with the plot. Very nice.
First impression: 3/5
Nice way to start a story. Straight to the point, cut to the chase!! :)
Plot: 7/10
Common plot used but it had plot twists so that was nice.
Grammar: 8/10
No spelling mistakes and amazing words used.
Though, you could use other kinds of words other than "says" or "said"
Punctuation: 9/10
Very good, no errors. However, there is one part. Try not to put an incomplete conversation in two separate paragraphs.
eg:
".... (incomplete)
(new paragraph) ...."
I took a while to understand what you were trying to say. So just avoid that kind of use.
Character development: 8/10
They were developed quite well I must say.
Flow: 7/10
I loved the way you described each scene. The pace was just nice. But maybe make it a bit... faster?
Writing style: 8/10
Loved your writing style. Unique and interesting.
Rules: 5/5
Total: 77/100
Personal opinion: It is a bit short for a completed story but nevertheless I enjoyed every chapter. If you could replace better words from "says" or "said" I think your story would be better.
Next the winner in Park Jimin category is
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Ok I don't want u to wait so here it is
Judge : @AMELIE1318
Book Title : Finding Love
Username: Tae_Candy_1996
It is a bit common, maybe changing to a more rarely used word?
Cover: 9/10
Loved the blending of Jimin and Taehyung. Pictures used were great!!
Blurb: 8/10
Enjoyed it. Plot is revealed just a bit. But I suggest putting the last sentence like this "...(your last sentence)" maybe it would be better?
First impression: 3/5
Straight to the point and described how Jimin thought. Good job.
Plot: 6/10
I think the idea of having a love triangle is great! However, it does sound a bit common to me...
Grammar: 9/10
No spelling mistakes and amazing choice of words.
Punctuation: 9/10
No punctuation error.
Character development: 9/10
Characters developed and blended into the story nicely. Really enjoyed all the events that you written!! :)
Flow: 9/10
Each chapter stops at an appropriate stop, not as if it was planned. Starts with amazing writing techniques.
Writing style: 8/10
Love how you describe your stories. (surroundings and characters)
Rules: 5/5
Total: 82/100
Personal opinion:
I think the story and all of its chapters are beautifully written. Just a few hiccups here and there. Either way, amazing job done!
So winner and runner will receive their prizes soon...be patient...and pls do vote one of the book of ur judge!
If not u will be blacklisted...
So here are the certificates for our wonderful judges..
And judges will also receive their prizes soon...the winner and runner will vote on one of ur book...if they didn't do it..then pm us!
Here are the certificates for the participants..
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As for the reviews for the participants...pls do pm [swee-ty] and receive them....
So congratulations to the winner and runner...
All the best for the participants to achieve it in ur future....
See u in the upcoming updates..
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