Jeon Jungkook Category {RESULTS}
So heyo buddies...
Host snow and dharshini here!
We are here to announce the winner and runner of the Jeon Jungkook Category..
Judges of jjk category: @Iamasuperstar30 and @_mikromosmos_
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so first lets see the runner!
Username: Niannez01
Book Name: For You
Judge: Iamasuperstar30
Title: (7.5/10)
The title is short and crisp but its very common and didnt catch my attention.
Cover: (6.5/10)
The cover needs some more inputs and graphics. Try some shops to make it eye catching.
Blurb: (8/10)
The blurb was short and nice because it made me curious. Although, addition of a few dialogues could have made it better.
First Impression: (5/5)
The first impression was really nice. I liked it and was intrigued to read.
Plot: (10/10)
The plot is new, not completely rare but its interesting and has mysterious elements added in between.
Grammar: (7.5/10)
You need to work here. Proof read your book once and dont use terms like 'I...I...' These terms are acceptable in dialogues but not in paragraphs.
Punctuation: (10/10)
Punctuations were placed correctly.
Character Development: (8.5/10)
The main character's past were unveiled slowly and their behaviour were also projected nicely. Didn't really see any development for others but still a great job done here.
Flow of the book: (9/10)
The flow of the book is good but I did feel that it was a bit rushed after the two met. The chapters are short so it appeared that things were getting rushed.
Writing Style: (10/10)
Your writing style is nothing special but its very easy to understand and doesn't confuse the reader so great work here.
Rules Followed: (5/5)
Total: (87/100)
A review: Overall the book was well written and a treat to read. You gave an alternate ending as well just for your readers and that was really needed. I have covered all the points above and I would just want you to work on the outer beauty of the book and a little bit of grammar. An attractive cover and title will grab more attention. Otherwise your work is great. All the best!
Next the winner of this category is.....
I see u are too eager for that....
umm...ok lets see..
Book: The Girl of My dreams Elegia
Usename: KimGits
Judge: @_mikromosmos_
Title: 9/10
it is good but too long.
Cover: 6/10
the cover is too crowded. it is good in its own way but doesn't matches your plot.
Blurb: 9/10
Its good, nothing much is revealed.
First impression: 4/5
Though there wasn't much excitement until the end, yet it kept me attracted.
Plot: 10/10
It was no doubt unique
Grammar: 10/10
No errors
Punctuation: 10/10
no errors.
Characters: 10/10
well developed.
Flow of the book: 10/10
smooth.
writing style: 10/10
I loved how you portrayed the emotions
Rules: 5/5
followed.
total: 93/100
Well written book. Keep it up! Cover could be a bit more appropriate
congratulations!!!
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So congratulations to the winner and runner...
All the best for the participants to achieve it in ur future....
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