Rating: 7.5

Grammar: B+

This was a really great read. It's an original CreepyPasta and I always find those interesting.

I think the only problem I had with it was the cliche parts of the story. But it can't be blamed at this point because now all cp stories are at least a little cliche.

There were a few spelling errors and stuff like that but it didn't bother me too much. It was still a great story to read. I really enjoyed it. The writer has a gift of telling the story and I think in time they'll become a truly great writer.

All in all, great story.