Rating: 8.5

Grammar: B+

This was not your average read. It's a story that explores the topic of Jeff being homosexual but not with another CP.

I thought this was such an amazing read. Very captivating, always made you want to keep reading. The chapters were fairly short but got the point across perfectly.

I really enjoyed/hated how it took like fifteen chapters before they kissed. I was so conflicted because from the beginning I wanted them to kiss but I also wanted the relationship to be built up. So conflicting and different from most stories!

The characters were all very unique and well written. Even Jeff was kind of showcased in a different way, which I really enjoyed.

The only complaints I have is the first chapter or two were kind of confusing, which did slightly lower your rating. Also, something that I enjoyed but found was overused, you use lots of italics in your story. Surprisingly, you manage to work it out very well with your writing style. Anyone else probably would not have been able to pull it off.

All in all, a very great and unique read. Definitely something I would recommend to others.