Rating: 8

Grammar: B+

I loved this story so much. It was great. The only problem was that there were a lot of questions left unanswered that I hope she will answer later.

I love how Jeff is a lot meaner and messes with Jamie a lot. He picks on her and she picks on him. It's beautiful.

I also like how Jeff has like a charm that lets him walk around. Like, it stops people from seeing who he is unless he wants them to.

It's really cool how the others are described as normally as possible until they get mad. It's like... an on and off switch. Like, with Gold, he can have his arms when he wants, but then he can go completely limbless sometimes. It's really cool and impressive.

The tree thing is actually a really good idea.

Also, I noticed this. If you look closely, 13 is an important number. The mansion has 13 floors. She gets taken to the mansion on Friday the 13th. I like it because 13 is considered a bad luck number in several places.

It's refreshing that her and Jeff don't even kiss until nearly the last chapters. Usually, they kiss like 10 chapters in or less.

Gabriel seems really suspicious. I'm keeping my eyes on him.

Rayne seems really annoying. I don't like her. Or Darcy.

I wonder who that second mystery point of view was. I'm going to bother the author on that.

Basically, it was a great story. I loved it.