May I just say...

OH MY GOSH YOU GUYS!!

That was some of the best writing that I've read in a long, long time!

Which is why there's a tie for second because every single entry was so good, I wanted everyone to get at least some recognition.

And I'm also adding Honorable Mentions because I really, really, really loved every single one.

Now for the results...

First: leucxsia

Second: sincerelyours- and BrookeNotAshley

Third: hannahsue--

Honorable Mentions: JustAWrite and mundenpoint

Everyone did amazing. Thank you so much for entering!

I encourage all of you to read the other entries and try and learn from each other as writers. 

Next contest will be up sometime this week!

"A writer is someone for whom writing is more difficult than it is for other people." -Thomas Mann