Here are the final round results of Ongoing Category...

1st Position
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Shubh Vivaah

Writer - shikhanitinkapoor

Judged By - Riddhima (me)

Review
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Plot : 39/40

The plot is based on arrange marriage but different from any other stories on Wattpad and seems more like a real life story. No unnecessary drama and twist and portrays what actually happens in an arranged marriage. So it really unique and interesting.

Writing Style: 15/20

Writing style is really very simple and chapters are dialogue based. It can be improved.

Expression: 23/25

Emotions are on point. The nervousness, shyness and hesitation between bride and groom before marriage is shown beautifully and well expressed 💖

Overall development: 14/15

The chapters I have read till now is good. Let's see what happens in future. But it will be the best if you keep the storyline focused more on real life like this with little plot twist. Overall it's a blockbuster.

Words Of Appreciation

You are an amazing writer and as far I know this is your first story but you wrote very beautifully. The plot you chose is also amazing and wish I could read more stories of this kind. Really loved it ❤️❤️

Point to be kept in view

Wish the chapters were little longer with more descriptions. Except that everything is perfect.

Total 91/100
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2nd Position
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More than just friends

Writer - its_muskan24

Judged By - Mehek ( sidnaaz_alaxy )

Review
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Plot : 37/40

Plot was good, kept hooked us to the story, love the positive change in other characters.

Writing style : 16/20

Writing is quite good need some improvement but impressive. I think you have a ability to write more amazing work.

Expression : 22/25

You expressed every character very well love still thoda aur express ho paate to story me chaar chaand lag jaate.

Overall development : 14/15

Story was amazing keep hooked every one, every chapter is written well, the twist was amazing just need some improvement overwise you rocked.

Words of appreciation :

Your wrote a excellent story, looking forward to read more amazing story from you... Love the way you shown the friendship and relationship balance in the story it felt quite good while reading the story... Thank you for participating.Lots of love and best of luck for future ❤️

Point to be viewed.

Story was amazing but i wish chapter will be little longer and if you shown their dating era more it will be good otherwise overall story was outstanding ❤️.

Total 89/100
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3rd Position
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All I need to love is you

Writer - sidnaazsoul

Judged By - Gurdeep ( punjabi_kudi )

Review
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Plot 35/40

Plot is good ... But i felt that it could be better ... You can do
much better I believe much love ...

Writing style 15/20

Writing style I felt it could be better there were not much descriptions about the scenes ..

Expressions 21/25

I feel that expressions are the most beautiful and important part of the book ... But i felt that emotions were not much expressed ... But some cute moments you described were pretty nice

Overall development
12/15

The chapters I have red till now had pretty cute moments but they could be described better ... But nice work 💗

Words of appreciation

I feel that you are a wonderful writer you just need to open up to expressions and descriptions more 💗

Point to be kept in view

Chapters could be a little longer ... And the plot could be shaped a little better ..

All the best ✨

Total 83/100
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Congratulations To Everyone ❤️❤️😊😊🥳🥳🥳🎉🎉🎉