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Final Round Result (Completed Category)

Here are the final round result of the completed category...

1st Position
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Love with stranger

Writer - munsen12

Judged by - Gurdeep (punjabi_kudi) and Mehek (sidnaaz_alaxy)

Review
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Plot 38/40
(Bohot acha plot hai interesting bhi hai kept hooked 😭 contrary to the title sweet lovely dovey book nhi h suspense hai thriller hai ...)

Expressions 22/25 (emotions thode or intense hone chaiye the ... But fighting scenes were top notch)

Writing style 19/20 (the use of French language ... And those poetries were cherry on top )

Overall development 13/15 (It was interesting kept hooked)

Words of appreciation..

You are the one of my favourite writers and you write damn good the mentions of those poetries were so heart warming ... It took my heart ... Too good and remembering all those names was damn difficult the plot was too complicated but you did justice kudos ...

Points to be kept in view

The ending i wished should have been a little intense ... I mean after the whole suspense of the story the built up the ending looked a little simpler ... But i loved itt ... Great work

Total: 92/100
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2nd position
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Abhi Abhi

Writer - SWSidNaazFan

Judged by - Mehek and Riddhima (me)

Review
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Plot 36/40

(The plot was very simple, sweet and presented beautifully by the writer. And it's not only a love story. It teaches a great lesson to the society which is really appreciable.)

Expression 23/25

(Felt all the emotions from the bottom of our heart. The characters didn't feel like a fictional one. We could relate with them. Great work.)

Writing Style 17/20

(Every chapter was described beautifully. The life lessons given in between was loved by us.)

Overall development 13/15 (It's an amazing book and loved it totally.)

Words of appreciation

You are great writer and very different from others. Like every other fiction it doesn't end on the reunion of the leads and gives glimpses of their future and their children's lives as well. It brings people out of the same old mentality and gives us something new. Overall it gives a full novel vibe.

Point to be kept in view

Other things were good but the flashbacks came so suddenly which made us confused sometimes. In that case you should have let us know when the story was going on flashback. Also the first few chapters were too short. But in spite of everything, we enjoyed it a lot.

Total: 89/100
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3rd Position
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Rebirth

Writer - Tiyaa862

Judged by - Riddhima and Gurdeep

Review
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Plot 37/40

(This story has a very unique plot and creates a great mystery in the first few chapters which attracts readers to read and keeps them hooked till the end.)

Writing style 15/20 (the writing style was more of simpler ... And descriptions were not that much ... The story was more focused on dialogus ... But it was a great one the dialogue delivery were intense ... Great )

Expressions 24/25 (as we said earlier the dialogue delivered were amazing felt them ... Characters se relate kar paaye aur unke emotions ko feel kar paaye dialogues ke through ... They were indeed great and thought upon ... loved it)

Overall development 11/15
(The story was great it was interesting kept us hooked ... But somewhere the dialogues and scenes were repeated ...and maybe you can work over the birth stories of both of the characters ... All the best we would be seeking for something like this from you in future )

Words of appreciation...

You know what you write you write from heart and that's what is felt when we read your books, the intense scenes, the emotions ... The dialogues that delivered so beautifully ... That they had left a great impact ... Over all ...great work and loved this

Point to be kept in view

The starting was so great that we expected the ending to be the same. But the ending was not that thrilling as compared to the beginning. And the characteristics of the leads in every birth was same. It would look better if you have changed it in any of the birth.... But overall it was a great story and loved reading it.

Total: 87/100
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