Title: You are my Sunshine
Chapters Read: 2/2
Score: 2/10

INTRODUCTION
You are my Sunshine is a cute romance about a terminally Ill woman and her smokingly-hot caretaker. A story that would've entertained but falls short on many aspects.

What I LIKED about your book;
The drama factor here also plays an important role and has been implemented well by the author. I also praise your long chapters too.

Your characters was commendable too. I got a certain liking with Summer. I clearly understood the pain she had to go on and that feeling of abandonment when she knew that she had 8 months left to live with her dreams being impossible to accomplish.

What I DIDN'T like about this book:
There's an incredible lacking when it came to details. The details were not narrated for my taste but rather, spoon-fed with your direct detailing of such. Pan out and view your world through the eyes of your character, spare only those what you think are irrelevant. There is also little to none attention given to scenery and most of the details is an infodump of information that is not relevant to the story nor entertaining to the reader; it just made the story more yawn material.

Now let's talk about dialogue. Some dialogue was great especially when it came to Summer knowing that she had 8 months to live. But the rest kind of went downhill. The dialogue was not accompanied by details and body language. Thus, whatever emotion or feeling your scene wanted to impose is fruitless as some of the dialogue came out quite awkward instead. Dialogue also made this also sound like, no offense, cheap romance stories. Try to tone their reactions down a little, especially Summer. Give her the dramatic effect of a girl reeling from her impending death in 8 months, appeal to the readers' emotions.

There were also some grammatical mistakes and spelling errors. I know it's hard to detect so to spare you some time, run them through Grammarly to get rid of such okay!

CONCLUSION
Due to the small amount of chapters, I wasn't able to determine more with your story.

But hey, your story has the potential! Just fix what I pointed out, give more details to scenery and world-building as they, too, are as important as your characters' details.

Keep practicing, everything can be inproved with practicing!