This is what I'll be judging you based on:

- Fluency and a good command of language [IMPORTANT]

- A diverse choice of vocabulary [IMPORTANT]

- Proper punctuations! (Typos may or may not be overlooked) so please, re-read!

- Character developments and proper characterisation

- A firm plot with minimal loopholes (don't stress here though, I intend to give leeway for this particular specification)

-Good and smart paragraphing

- Last but not least, don't over-describe! No one wants to know if her vomit came from her stomach, throat, intestines or what colour her insides were! It truly is an absolute waste of words. (Sorry if that was disgusting)

And that's about it!

This few chapters will be the only ones posted until I decide to put the contest up (which is soon actually)

xx
octaves