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Here is the entry of pastellites-
Here is your score :
Relativity : 27/30
Creativity : 23/25
Originality : 19/20
Neatness : 13/15
Audience Impact : /10
Total : 82/100
I'll add the audience impact after the contest proper.
Alma's Comment :
Sorry sa abala. Copy paste lang kasi ginawa ko then papalitan ang laman, I didn't mean to publish it. Now for my comment, una sa lahat I love na typography ang style na ginamit mo, even though na simple lang ang typography, nakayanan mo'ng maging maganda ang kinalabasan. Simple pero may dating. The background, where the heck do you get photos like that? You got to tell me. Mukhang mirror na may condensation at pinupunas ng girl (tama ba?), pero sa demands ko is that of a guy searching or what, hindi mo ginawa pero it's fine, super fine. Problem ko rin is yung maliit na photo sa upper right corner ng cover, di ko gets bakit nandoon yun pero baka watermark so dineduct ko na lang ng konti sa neatness iyon. As for the placing of it all, I liked it. Problem ko is the subtitle, mas ginusto ko sana if hindi ka na gumawa ng box sa upper left corner at doon linagay, but that's just my opinion. And yung spacing between the contest name and your watermark, napasobrahan yata sa layo, sana hindi mo sila masyadong ipinagkalayo. That's all lang naman, great job and good luck.
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