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Cover: First off, your cover is gorgeous! I can tell that your cover is depicting the town in your story. I do recommend that you increase the size of your title by one or two, but other than that it's amazing!

Title(5/5): Your title is the first one to come up, but the title itself is gripping. As a reader, if I saw that title, the first thing I'd do would be to click on your book so I'd know what I needed to remember. 

Blurb(8/10): Here is where I have a bit of a problem. Your blurb sounds more like a five star review than an actual blurb. Yes, it tells us what elements your book has featured, but it doesn't tell us much about the book itself. I want to know the background information. Who is your main character? What is the conflict? Is there a solution? I need information like this that will make me want to read your book. Your blurb has a 50/50 chance. Some readers might like it and read it. Other readers may only give you a chance because of your title and cover. By the way, when adding the title of your book into the blurb so people don't get confused, add an apostrophe or quotation mark to separate it from the rest of the sentence. 

Spelling/Grammar(14/15): Your spelling and grammar are great. I also have to commend you on your expanded vocabulary. I really loved the way you described the surroundings in your novel. As someone who is still getting the hang of it, reading your book and learning from you was great. You only have one itty bitty problem. Your paragraphs are long. I'm fond of reading on mobile and when you read on mobile, these paragraphs seem twice as long. I recommend breaking them up into two or more parts so it's more readable that way. 

Creativity/Originality(20/20): Writing philosophy isn't an easy task in my opinion. Trying to write philosophy, but depicting it in a more modern format seems like an even harder task. The way you introduced the characters in was beautiful. While this may sound weird, I was able to imagine everything and your writing style made your novel flow smoothly.

Plot(25/25): Your plot was creative and amazing in it's own right. You were reaching out to your readers with a group of modern-era teens who stopped and took a look around to realize the system was broken. 

Reader Enjoyment(25/25): I definitely enjoyed this, and bonus, I learned a lot from reading it. Such as how to improve my own writing. Amazing job and keep writing!

Total: 97/100

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