Author: AJSonline

Cover: The cover looks nice, but technically, not so much. The golden 'Until' is clashing with the black 'You'. The font of the 'Until' isn't exactly unreadable, but not everyone will know what its saying on the dot. The font of the 'You' is black and bold which isn't exactly going with everything else. Same with your name. And, the golden words in the corner is just no. I couldn't read it at all. I'm not a graphic designer so I can only point out how it looks, and I have no ideas to fix it. So, of course, I advice going to a graphic designer/shop.

Title(4/5): I can see where you're going with your title and it makes sense. But, the whole 'Until You' theme conveyed in the title is a bit cliche. While I do understand how her whole world changed upon meeting him, I would advice spicing it up a bit. Other than that, its quite fine.

Blurb(8/10): Your blurb doesn't have any mistakes for the most part. But, I was a tad bit annoyed seeing the word 'invisible' being repeated and the fact that Austin changed her life repeated. Yes, I understand that his personality and way of living astounded her and all, but it would be nice to edit those specific parts.

Spelling/Grammar(13/15): While it wasn't amazing, it was readable. A few minor mistakes that can easily be fixed when you go back to read it over.

Creativity/Originality(14/20): I won't lie, I felt a bit inexperienced grading your plot and creativity seeing as I don't read books with college leveled characters as much. But, from the ones I have read, your book seems quite similar to them. A quiet, shy girl who likes to stay invisible meets a guy that changes her whole world. Yes, things like this could possibly happen, but its been used multiple times. I wanted to tell you to give her some sort of quirk that makes her stand out, but I don't want you to fall into the cliche hole of, "I'm not like other girls! I'm qUirKy!"

Plot(14/25): This new kid drops in, is popular because of his looks, and already makrs our female MC want to stay away from him. Change it, please. Cut out the new kid part, and what I always feel helps the most is switching the roles. The female MC is this new chick that's stunning and is already insanely popular. The male MC is this guy that likes staying invisible but the female seems to light his world up.

Reader Enjoyment(15/25): Overall, it seems it could be more interesting than it is now. Grammar and such is fine for the most part, its just the plot and originality that needs the most looking into.

Total: 68/100

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