Author: angiexvi

Cover: I can see why you chose the victorian-esque cover for your book. It works well with the entire vibe you're going for. My only problem with is the fact that the cover seems "dull". While the smoke in the background looks cool, it's really only adding to the dullness. The font for the title blends in as well, and pops out in a good way. The size helps you see it and read it comfortably. As usual, I will always recommend going to a graphic designer. 

Title(5/5): A lot of other books come up with the same title, but most of them are fanfictions, so that's not an issue I'll touch on. Your title has that interesting vagueness. Your title also makes it clear that there the conflict in your book involves some sort of plan that will change the entire direction of the characters' lives. 

Blurb(9/10): Sometimes I'm nitpicky on blurbs because they're rather short, but I didn't have too many problems with yours. It gives the basic information. The character, their conflict, a vague idea of the solution, and the cliffhanger of whether they will fail or succeed. The only problem with it was the last two sentences of the entire blurb. 

Original- Will she succeed? Or will she fail?

Edited- Will she succeed or fail?

The edited version wraps it up better than the original.

Spelling/Grammar(13/15): First off, thank you for adding a warning about your grammar. Second off, you have minimal mistakes. An occasional extra space between letters, accidental misspelling, and things of that nature. For the most part, your spelling and grammar were fine and didn't hinder the book to the point of being unreadable.

Creativity/Originality(18/20): In all honesty, I haven't read many victorian-era books on Wattpad, so I wasn't sure what to expect. I simply thought she would find some way to break away, marry the man she loves, and boom, happy ending. What I wasn't expecting was the fact that she herself wanted to murder her father. For me, that was quite a plot twist. Personally, your book seems interesting. Then again, you may want to find out from another reviewer apart from me seeing as I'm fairly new to books on Wattpad set in the time period that yours is in. 

Plot(24/25): Anastasia wants to kill her father because she knows how much of a threat he is to the general monarchy and to other countries. At first her brother Casper doesn't completely agree until he learns of the coming invasion. So far, this plan is rather interesting. I enjoyed the way she was bold and unfiltered about it. 

Reader Enjoyment(24/25): Personally, I won't read books put in the medieval era unless they are truly well written and detailed. Of course this is ironic because one of my own novels isn't exactly detailed. I honestly wish Ani had been a bit more open toward her brother's relationship, but at the same time, it made the book more realistic. People back then weren't exactly open to the idea of LGBT. It was all extremely new to them and all they knew was manxwoman. Anything else was deemed unnatural. I can see why she didn't immediately understand, but that doesn't mean she had the right to be rude to her brother about it. So far, I like Casper more than Ani. He wants to change England for the better. He wants to end all forms of discrimination and slavery to make England a better place. 

Total: 93/100

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