Author: miaamigo

Cover: Your cover was quite nice in my opinion. I'm not going to lie, I was a tad bit creeped out by all the babies, and it was a bit blurry so I couldn't really see it. I saw the baby in the background with..black eyes? I honestly couldn't tell what your story was going to be about, so I don't have much to tell you about it.

Title (4/5): Splintered Moon is the title of your book, and its quite unique. Here's the problem though,when I see titles with the word 'moon' in them, they make me think of werewolf  books where the female protagonist is a weird vampire, mermaid, wolf, witch hybrid. Yes, its unique, its just the moon part of it that reminds me of werewolf books. I searched up your title and your book did not appear at all. Books about dragons and sorcerers came up. I think you need to edit it a bit so that people don't get the wrong idea when they see it.

Blurb(8/10): I liked your blurb. It wasn't extrememly straightforward and it had the right amount of vagueness that made me intrigiued. Before I even started the story, the blurb made me feel somewhat connected to the characters. I won't lie though, I had to re-read it a few times to figure out who was who. Good job either way! 👍

Spelling/Grammar(14/15): I..I couldn't find anything wrong. Occasionally you had a few grammar mistakes, but as usual I recommend getting an Editor, getting Grammarly (Premium version, the free one is awful), or just taking time to re-read what you wrote.

Creativity/Originality(15/20): I really liked it. Your story was quite intriguing. A story about abortion sent in the olden times of India. It made me sad to know that female children weren't wanted simply because they were female. I enjoyed the fact that you included the 'Know What You're Reading' part, but maybe it would've been better before the actual story instead of after.

Plot(15/25): Your overall plot was simply put, great. You chose a mature topic, did your reasearch, and kept it realistic while conveying the right amount of emotion needed in the right areas. It wasn't too over the top, and while it was a bit confusing nearing the part of the hallucination, you still wrote quite well.

Reader Enjoyment(18/25): It was an amazing story and it felt like a breath of fresh air for me. You described everything really well to the point where I felt like I was there. I couldn't tell she was hallucinating, so I had to re-read that part a few times. The emotion was very real, but I do think that you can work on making it a bit clearer.

Total: 60/100

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