Author: @livinginthenever08

Cover: Your cover was simple. I'm not trying to be rude, but nothing stood out about it. If I had been searching for a book to read, there's a good chance that I'll easily pass over yours, because it doesn't catch my eye in any way. I understand that you are trying to symoblize their relationship with them holding hands, and yes it goes with your title, but it's...plain. I suggest finding a graphic shop, and if you would like me to recommend one to you, I'd be happy to.

Title(2/5): I'm going to be straightforward with this. Your title is cliche. I searches it up and I found books with the exact same title as you. Yes, it goes with your plot but it's just there. There's nothing about it that stands out. When I was younger and had problems with finding titles for my book, I used a website called fantasygenerator.com. You can use that to generate titles according to the genre you chose. I recommend using this to give yourself a head start and get your gears turning.

Blurb(3/10): The blurb of your book is extremely cliche. It has the whole 'will they be able to break down each other's walls?' trope, that I've seen many times. Try to dig deeper and create something original.

Spelling/Grammar(13/15): Your spelling and grammar were fine! I didn't find anything wrong, nor did I find misspelled words. Good job on this!

Creativity/Originality(5/20): I'm sorry but, no. It begins with her moving to a new town because of her mother's job, a first day at a new school, and meeting a girl who she's already practically best friends with after one interaction. Harvey is a popular jerk and the teacher just happens to coincidentally pair Ryleigh up with him. Yes, this is realistic because we've all been paired with someone we hate. But, it stops being realistic when it happens in every book. No offense, but why can't he be nice instead? Why does she need to have a mean sister and mother? I'd rather that Ryleigh bumps into Harvey and he's a really sweet guy, instead of a bad boy who thinks the best way to show that he likes her is by being rude to her.

Plot(9/25): It once again was cliche. I suggest changing the character's personalities or maybe even switch the roles. Maybe make Ryleigh mean and make Harvey the new kid on the block and he's trying to convince himself that he hates a player like her, but in reality he doesn't? I'm simply throwing some ideas out there. If you don't want to use them, that's fine.

Reader Enjoyment(9/25): I feel like your book could be better if you changed some things, because I honestly did not enjoy it. It wasn't original. I'm not trying to discourage you from writing or make you delete your story. I just feel like it could be better.

Total: 41/100

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