Author: @nabs_xoxo

Cover: Your cover looks weird. The font catches my eye. My main problem is the fact there is a face in the background with this weird blue, gray, green (whatever color) smoke. Then in the right corner, we have this fractured glass with three people. I'm going to take a wild guess and say the girl is Amyra and the two guys are the detectives. Please go to a graphic designer.

Title(5/5): It does come up first which makes me happy, but there were still a few other cliche teen fiction books that bore the same title. I usually don't comment on the title's relation to a story hecause that isn't the best way to judge. Yet, from what I saw, the title 'If She Knew' hints to Amyra not knowing about the murder, right? And if she knew.... I really like the vibe around it.

Blurb(9/10): The first line of the blurb made me stop and think about my reality for a few moments. The line about love and fate seemed a tad bit cliche, but other than that, your blurb was fine.

Spelling/Grammar(15/15): Now, this was amazing. Good job!

Creativity/Originality(18/20): I haven't read lots of thrillers here on Wattpad, because frankly, they're usually trash. No offense to actual authors who are doing their best. I'm sensing a love triangle between the main female and the two detectives. In my opinion, love triangles are used a lot. If you are going to go that route, make sure she had a genuine reason for liking both of them. Now, onto the murders. I liked how you made their deaths seem natural while making the main character a suspect.

Plot(23/25): I quite liked how you started the first chapter. It starts off with kind of this high tension surrounding the family considering the fact that two family members were supposedly murdered. Amyra believes they were murdered but to the detectives, it seems like another death. What saddened me is when Amyra had the will passed down to her and she was suspected to be the murderer. Sure, it seems likely, but they're family and they should have trusted her.

Reader Enjoyment(23/25): I enjoyed the plot of your story! But, what deterred me was your cover. I usually look at the covers, then at the titles. Covers are kind of a make or break. Its how you lose and gain many readers. (This in my personal opinion.)

Total: 93/100

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