Author: DocileFiasco

Cover: I noticed that you changed your cover. I like this new one better than the old one because it really shows the whole "glitched in colors" idea. I was thinking that maybe you could have like an aura of colors surrounding him, and he's glitching at the same time. You don't have to do this, I was just thinking that it would look really cool like that.

Title(4/5): I searched your title up and it never came up. Now, this does not mean that your title isn't unique. It is but we both know Wattpad is sort of an idiot. When I see this title, nothing hits me. I don't have an idea of what's going to happen in the book. Its an interesting title, and its a good way to draw in readers. But, there are some readers who prefer to look at the title and have some sort of an idea as to what its about.

Blurb(7/10): Its intriguing and I like the air of mystery that you had in the beginning of it. Your words flowed nicely, until we got to the part about Mira and blood. What does tasting her blood have to do with him being glitched in colors? This part made me think it was going to be about vampires until I read the tags.

Spelling/Grammar(15/15): Your spelling and  grammar were 👌. I didn't find any misspelled words, and your grammar was great. I have nothing to say about this particular topic, good job!

Creativity/Originality(20/20): In terms of this, I'd say you soared quite high. I liked the idea of him being color blind while being able to see colors that describe a person's personality. It makes him a walking paradox. Mira on the other hand, is a total queen. She's a badass and I really like her character.

Plot(24/25): Your plot was 👏👏. I really enjoyed it. Like the spelling/grammar part, I don't have much to say. But..in the beginning (prologue) I was terribly confused as to what was happening. I later realized that the prologue was about him and Mira, so major face-palm moment right there. Other than the confusion, you did really well. I enjoyed your book a lot!

Reader Enjoyment(24/25): I'm a very slow person, so I end up re-reading books like three times sometimes simply because I didn't understand. You had one of those books. It was overall an amazing book, but I would like if you had made it clearer what was happening. Then again, like I said, I'm a slow person, so you don't have to change it if you feel its not necessary.

Total: 94/100

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