"Detective Exorcist" Review
Author: @TheSpadeandAce
Cover: So, your cover was fine for the most part. I liked all the warning stickers, but what I assumed was supposed to be demons in the back was a bit blurry. Other than that it was fine.
Title(5/5): Your title is very unqiue, and was the first thing to pop up when I searched it up. It wraps up your whole story in two words, a detective that's an exorcist. It's simple and straightforward. Good job!
Blurb(8/10): Now, your blurb was actually quite intriguing. It was vague (in a good way), and still made me want to click that 'Read' button.
Spelling/Grammar(10/15): I didn't find any misspelled words or wrong grammar, and I know why. You had a beta-reader! Good decision, I have one as well for an ongoing book and she's amazing!
Creativity/Orginality(15/20): A detective that is an exorcist, and also an illegitimate child. I have to applaud you on this, it was really intriguing and I kept on reading and reading.
Plot(17/25): The betrayal in the beginning of the book really hit me. You grabbed my attention immediately and had me glued to the screen.
Reader Enjoyment(20/25): I honestly feel like your book could be an anime or tv show. I really enjoyed it, and at times I was a bit afraid, but I kept on reading, because your story just has that vibe. Good job! Ultimately, I'm sorry but I think you need to enforce the 'show not tell' rule more. Other than that, it was good.
Total: 75/100
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