Author: Aarya2103

Cover: When I looked at the cover(after reading the blurb), I assumed you were trying to portray Jessica's allodynia. When I first looked at it though, I didn't know what to think. Covers should be able to give your reader somewhat of an idea of what the book will be about. Yes, technically your cover did that. But I only figured out the idea after I had read the blurb.

Title(5/5): Yes! It comes up first. Your title completely captures your book. Your title interested me because:
1. I had never seen that word before (honest)
2. It had a fantasy-like feel to it. (I felt a bit misled when I found out that it wasn't fantasy, but I say this in a joking manner.)
3. It truly interested me

Blurb(8/10): Your blurb is fine for the most part. It starts to go downwards when we get to the part where the fate of the world rests in their hands. If you're going to add that in your blurb, add some sort of background info that lets the reader know why the world is in their hands.

Spelling/Grammar(14/15): You've already said that English isn't your first language, so I understand. But, your grammar was quite good. I didn't catch any spelling mistakes either. A piece of advice: Make sure that each sentence connects to the other, like a jigsaw puzzle. Every piece matters. Make sure the paragraphs connect as well and that each part of the entire story connects and flows well.

Creativity/Originality(18/20): I haven't read too many books about disorders here on Wattpad. When I do, they manage to miraculously turn it into a joke. In the first chapter, Em(Jess's friend), accidentally touches Jessica. Jessica is hurt and you beautifully described her pain and why her not being touched is important. I find it quite sad that her tears evem cause her pain.

Plot(23/25): I liked how everything started out, right until we got to Chase. I understand that you've already established that Chase will be the exception to her disorder. What I would've liked, is for some sort of background information(even the vaguest bit), to help me see why he's the exception. Is it related to her emotionally as well? Does he have some sort of genes? Something that will give me an idea.

Reader Enjoyment(23/25): I liked the idea of your plot, but I feel that you should go back and edit when you have the time(plot wise). Ask yourself a few questions about your book. If you don't have an answer in mind or already in the book, you may need to look it over.

Total: 91/100

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