Author: midnight_misfit

We, writers, always want our work to be critiqued. Don't we? :)

First, the cover. The cover seems nice; very appropriate for the story, with a clipart of a brain on the center. However, it hasn't caught my interest. But it looks cute! I just wished you didn't use a green colored background, but I don't know, the color green might have its own symbolisms. You know, since it's cancer, green for life.

Anyway, I like the description! I loved how you personified the brain tumor, nice work. That was the most catchy in your description of the story. :)

As for the first two chapters, it was nice that you started it with what she thinks about journals, it makes readers think that your story will be all about her showing her day, what the hell happened to her and etc.. It also gives a hint of drama! Oh I love drama. I mean dramas that make you cry, not fight with bitches ya know. Okay, I sound weird.

I like her sister's name btw! Ebony 💗

I love how the second chapter ended. It's like, she doesn't want to think about her bigger problems. Is that what you want readers to convey? That's how I get it somehow. I surely am gonna read this further. I feel that it would be something very relatable. :)