Author: 1Writer2016

Hello! :) I'm sorry it was a bit late, but finally my midterms are over yey!

First of, I'll start with your cover. Your cover was precisely fit for the genre of your story, but there's something lacking or an element in your cover should be improved. I think it was the arrangement of the text that makes up your title. It was good that you used different fonts to highlight words in you title. :)

The description is great! You have good grammar; I saw no errors in the description, and the way you made it was perfect! It actually made me interested in your story. Loved how it was cliff-hanged. Good job in that! :)

The first two parts were definitely good! It was great that you immediately started with an action, one way to intrigue the readers and keep them on the edge of their seats (Including me)! I loved how you filled out the readers with in-depth description of the scenes, that would really help in visualizing the chapter mentally. :) I didn't find errors all throughout the chapters. An A++ for this story! *applauds*