Author: MrSanguine

Hello! *waves* so let's get this over with.

Your cover is really awesome. I love the shades of blue swirling and all! Really eye-catchy and pretty. Nice work! :)

The description hooked me. It was interesting, intriguing and promises action. I love action! And oh, you've got good grammar as well! I noticed no grammatical, punctuational or spelling errors all throughout the description :)

The first two chapters are super cool. Good thing you have a warning on your description, because if not, oh God I would've fainted in the part where Darius cut the tongue (I'm overreacting sorry). I didn't see any error, I love the words you used, it makes me think that you are a professional in writing! Oh and I love the name Domino! :) all in all, I think your story is great! If not for the two chapters, I would've read some more :(