Author: Sunburn_11

Hi, good afternoon! :) so let's get this over with.

Your cover is pretty! :) I love it. It was nice of you to emphasize the word change by making it script. It definitely is eye-catchy. Good job!

The description made me interested in the story. It was good that there were no grammar or punctuation or spelling errors. Any reader who would've read the description would definitely be interested!

Your first part, the prologue is perfect. No grammar, punctuation or spelling errors. Neat! I loved the way how you started your story, immediately highlighting the change Harper had. I find it funny as well, which made me hooked to read your story more! The first chapter too is perfect! It doesn't have any errors (Good job in proofreading by the way), and I loved how you put description in each scenes without overwriting it. Nice!