Author: Lady-Senpai

Hello! :) I'm sorry it was posted a bit late. :(

Anyway, I'll start with your cover. Your cover is amazing! It is really eye-catching and very appropriate for the content of your story. Good job!

The description is perfect, although I think you should capitalize letter G in god. Other than that, the description you wrote is beautifully written, using just the right words to summarize and leave it hanging. Nicely done!

The first two parts are great, but somehow I felt like the first chapter was rushed because of the very little lack of descriptions in the scenes. But then, I like it! I usually skip the descriptions when I read something 😂 Oh and I love the name of Raava! It's unique, and I'm sick of hearing cliché names again and again. I think your story is really interesting and quite different (I like different). ☺️