Author: PeculiarPat34

Hello, good morning! :) (It's morning here in the Philippines *laughs*) okay, lemme start this.

First things first, the cover. I love how your cover matches the theme of your poems. It is really appropriate for a work that is about peculiars. Nicely done! :) It just didn't stir my interests. But hey, it doesn't mean that it hasn't stirred my interest does mean that it's not good. It's good, actually. (Am I making some sense? *sobs*)

The description is excellent. It's very thrilling and can really hold the attention of a reader. Loved how you make it sound like there's really something as peculiar people in real life. (Maybe there is, I dunno, I haven't read Miss Peregrine's Home for Peculiar Children, the pictures disturbed me *cries*)

As for the first two poems, they were almost perfect. It was lovely that you used a lot of figures of speech and imagery. I loved how you described Korina btw! (It made me wonder, in the part "Last Night", was that still her?) The only very little flaw the poem has is the rhyming scheme. There was one stanza in the first poem and the second poem that has not matched the rest of the poems' rhyming. It was like:

A
A
B
B

That's the rhyming scheme of your first stanza of your first poem. Then the rest follows this scheme:

A
B
A
B

But nonetheless, I think you make great poems! I'm not much of a poem reader, but your poems made me consider reading them :)