Author: peneloperaywrites

Hi! :) okay, lemme start this.

I love your cover! It caught my interest. Nice use font by the way, and the layout with the title in the middle and some sort of interesting question surrounding it. Nice! :)

The description is awesome. Any reader who would've read that description would be interested. (Not unless if the reader is not interested with heroes and villains). I love Coal Black's name! It sounds coal (cool okay?) *laughs* I also loved the way you made your description with a cliffhanger, that is one way to make a reader interested, to leave it always hanging.

Other writers always advice that never start a chapter with a dialogue. But I say, we break the rulz! I loved the plot, that the hero and the villain was actually twins. It's good that you don't overdo the descriptions you put in each chapters, you'll sustain readers. Oh, and I loved how your second chapter ended! It made me curious, real curious. Good job!