Title: Valkyrie: Life of a Warrior
Genre: Fantasy
User: MarvelDan6

Cover/Title & Summary:
I love love your cover! It's mysterious yet incredibly compelling. It completely caught my attention.

Your description is perfect. I think it could have a little more info and suspense which would surely add more curiosity to your readers. 

First Impressions:
I loved the prologue, it left me full of curiosity for what's about to come. You portrait JJ really well, and I think it's extremely easy to relate to her. Her 'normal' life, along with the humor that you added it made your book very easy to read.

Character Development:
You portray JJ well, she is funny and easy to connect, but I think you could have developed her more deeply. It's easy to see what's on the surface, but I lacked the depth of what made her personality. You touched on some of the things that created her past, like how she wished to have a father, but apart from that, there aren't many glimpses of her past that makes her the character that she is.

Plot:
If I can completely honest with you, if I haven't known that this was a fantasy book, I would have assumed that I was reading teen fiction. There a lot of teenage stuff going on, and there isn't much fantasy apart from the purple girl's. I'm not sure if you were trying to make it into a more realistic version or if you are holding back a lot. I was also missing more depth into the plot, there are so many shallow details that don't take me wrong, it brings some fun moments into your plot, but you should also add more intense scenes to create some balance. But even on the most scenes, JJ was dealing with everything as she would if she was at college.

I loved the suspense of your plot; I think toy has amazing potential unique story in your hands, you made connections with other characters, but there could be more details on their character development as well. The foundation of your plot is there but there isn't much detail in it and I think that's something you can always go back and change so you can make your story more complete and engaging.

Conclusion:
Believe it or not, I loved your book. I just wish that you could dive in more deeply when developing your story. I wanted to know more about JJ, I wanted to see her input on magic even before she potentially had some of her own. I wanted to know her fears and what makes her happy.

I wanted to see more of you in the story. When writing a book, we have to be vulnerable at some point because that will give your character a deep personality that readers can connect. But great job :)

Reviewed by claudushka

I apologize for any typos. Thank you for allowing us to review your book. I hope I didn't offend you in any way. Remember that you are already an amazing writer. I'm just trying to help you to improve. In no way shape or form, I think I think that you are not an excellent writer. Feel free to reach out if you need anything else❤️

I would rate this book 4 out of 5

Book Star 4